His Touch

His hands stroking me--- like a soft breeze on my neck love's embrace has come

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Date: 3/3/2009 4:57:00 AM

Congratulatons on your win in Kristin's contest with this beauty, Carrie! Love, Robin

Date: 2/14/2009 3:04:00 AM

A great haiku and so deserving a win in Ms. Reynold's contest. Soft and gentle. Peace always, John

Date: 2/13/2009 9:37:00 AM

Wow - awesome! Congrats Brandee on your well deserved win in Kristin's contest! Love, Shar

Date: 2/12/2009 7:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your fabulous poem. Laurie

Date: 2/12/2009 6:18:00 PM

Brandee congrats on placing in Kristin's contest - God Bless, MJ

Date: 12/27/2008 2:44:00 PM

Beautiful piece...short and to the point

Date: 12/15/2008 11:00:00 AM

Very, very nice. Thanks for your comments on my honorable mention. Love, Joyce

Date: 12/5/2008 1:39:00 PM

smooth as it comes and well written, thank you for sharing.

Date: 11/27/2008 5:05:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku! Wonderfully written.

Date: 11/27/2008 4:00:00 PM

beautiful it is....thanks for your passionnate words.....always Maryam