His Touch

His hands stroking me---
like a soft breeze on my neck
love's embrace has come
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Gass Avatar
March 3, 2009 at 4:57 AM
Congratulatons on your win in Kristin's contest with this beauty, Carrie! Love, Robin
Heck Avatar
February 14, 2009 at 3:04 AM
A great haiku and so deserving a win in Ms. Reynold's contest. Soft and gentle. Peace always, John
Winter Avatar
February 13, 2009 at 9:37 AM
Wow - awesome! Congrats Brandee on your well deserved win in Kristin's contest! Love, Shar
Ginn Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 7:59 PM
Congratulations on your fabulous poem. Laurie
Jordan Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 6:18 PM
Brandee congrats on placing in Kristin's contest - God Bless, MJ
Malebranche Avatar
December 27, 2008 at 2:44 PM
Beautiful piece...short and to the point
Johnson Avatar
December 15, 2008 at 11:00 AM
Very, very nice. Thanks for your comments on my honorable mention. Love, Joyce
Burton Avatar
December 5, 2008 at 1:39 PM
smooth as it comes and well written, thank you for sharing.
Higgins Avatar
November 27, 2008 at 5:05 PM
Beautiful Haiku! Wonderfully written.
Haniff Avatar
November 27, 2008 at 4:00 PM
beautiful it is....thanks for your passionnate words.....always Maryam
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