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His Sweet Gift

A sweet gesture of love from my gentle-man Star Along with the groceries, A big chocolate bar! We're growing old, yet kindness embraces After all of these years Though we've lines on our faces He makes me forget that I'm not a young girl When his sweet little gestures of love Spin my world I wasn't beside him when he filled that cart Nor seen the grand total that makes Accounts smart Watching each penny, and where each dime went A few bags of groceries A lot of cash spent Yet I crossed his mind...a gift bought for me My dear Sweethearts love is As Sweet as can be! My gentle-man husband, to me, a rock star Kind gestures of love Are the sweetest by far!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 11/22/2023 8:09:00 AM
Something gifted with love has more worth than its cost! You are fortunate to have got such a person as partner in life who caters to even your small whims. So nice receiving your comment and reading your sweet poem, dear B.J
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Date: 11/17/2023 1:31:00 PM
your tenderizing my heart lol ,
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Date: 11/15/2023 3:53:00 PM
This is really sweet.. what better than chocolate as a gift.. a lovely poem my friend.
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Date: 11/10/2023 6:02:00 PM
Sweet gifts for a sweet gal, BJ. Thanks for sharing the good things in life with us. I'm tired of listening to all the bad stuff. I'm happy you found someone that is thoughtful and loving to you, I'm sure you're the same way to him. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 11/9/2023 1:12:00 PM
I really like this one, BJ. Sweet is indeed the word, the candy bar and the poem:)
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Date: 11/8/2023 11:49:00 AM
You can say that Gin. It's the little things that mean a lot. Great job here. I know you made him feel special with this sweet tribute to him. God Blss, JB
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Date: 11/7/2023 12:52:00 PM
What a wonderful romantic write. Great Ending... Your man knows how to win your heart with a big chocolate bar. He is a keeper. Have a wonderful day writing away..........
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Date: 11/7/2023 12:10:00 AM
So romantic. Love keeps your heart young and strong.
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Date: 11/6/2023 6:36:00 PM
So sweet -- your husband, his gift, and this poem. Love it! Thanks, gw
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Date: 11/6/2023 5:04:00 PM
aww what a lovely surprise, this is so tender and romantic BJ he is definitely a keeper! hugs Jan xx
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