His Right Leg

A note pinned to the thigh reserves it,
the whole cadaver is parceled off.
Legs are a late harvest of the indigent.
Their limbs carry a visual poverty
long after the body is plucked.

In a small room, I separate
muscle groups, filter large blood vessels
from fibrous runnels. 
My scalpel seeking out fascial planes.

The leg is devolving to scraps,
yet ingrained in the tissue,
I sense residual shades of a life.
Seaside postcards and old photographs,
war ribbons and yellowed newspaper clippings.

The gray flesh retains its memories.
There’s a wife behind his knee,
bone whittling winds have not erased her features,
her youthful form still entwined
around ashen ligaments.

A child climbs up from an ankle bone,
as a sinewy plasma -
it has no substance of its own,
but borrows and gathers a varicose presence.

Sights and scenes invest 
a limbs mangled landscape.
Images that can’t be cut away
by living hands.

Some imagine they dissect a limb,
but I turn bloodless pages,
read images once squirreled away, 
that now form these sinews
of a journey’s end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 12/4/2019 2:37:00 AM
2)I'm doing some anatomy studies to improve my understanding of what "lies beneath the skin.." ( Even being "older" doesn't mean learning ends..) Yet what struck me the most, is the need to give "life" to a human being one doesn't know personally, and that a dead person is not just "flesh and bone.." And in this, I think we resist our own mortality. "Yet ingrained in the tissue I sense residual shades of a life...Images that cant be cut away with living hands" These words deeply felt. ~AquaM~
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Aqua Marine
Date: 12/5/2019 1:14:00 AM
My son has a few books on anatomy, including Greys. As a child, I used to go through my father's set of surgery books. Totally fascinated. So I'm doing my own study. Yes, its sad to "use" bodies for medical research, that's why I appreciated your empathy, and respectful perspective. Warm regards~~AquaM~~
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Eric Ashford
Date: 12/4/2019 8:56:00 AM
Yes, such things must be undertaken ( I actually question the practical need for such nowadays), in a respectful way, and even the less sensitive Med Student should try to understand the living person behind the corpse. Thank you for your understanding.
Date: 12/4/2019 2:17:00 AM
I have read this a few times now, Eric, and I wasn't sure how to comment, maybe because of the "layers" exposed, that peel back my own inner history. Thoughts of Da Vinci dissecting bodies late at night in mortuaries, seeing shapes in clouds and abstract paintings.The time I watched a beggar walking past me when I was sixteen, and trying to work out his suffering from a well fed white girls point of view. My father was a doctor for the poor "railway" people, and in a government hospital. 2)
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Eric Ashford
Date: 12/4/2019 8:53:00 AM
Hi Aqua Marine, thank you for the insights and personal reflections on this. I think you have correctly read my intent in this poem and I thank you for the commentary. Yes, the poverty aspect plays a large part in the poem. Unfortunately or not, often the homeless deceased are 'used' for anatomical purposes in Med Schools.
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