His Retreat

beyond the thickets past the clearings virgin trails cool as licks of ice his retreat... yet awaits him

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Date: 4/12/2022 1:23:00 PM

You had me at "thicket" - and you never let me down.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/12/2022 8:21:00 PM

Caren, I only disappoint those who have poor taste. lol. Thanks, Gershon

Date: 4/12/2022 12:45:00 PM

Mysterious! Are you hiding out?

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/12/2022 8:20:00 PM

Who me? Hide out? ~ Herman's Hermits... Is the (US) coast clear yet?

Date: 4/12/2022 6:22:00 AM

A special little hideaway…..love it! Debx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/12/2022 7:12:00 AM

Here's to find a special hideaway for yourself, Deb! :)

Date: 4/12/2022 6:14:00 AM

I could use that right about now Gershon. Do you write from experience ??

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/12/2022 7:11:00 AM

I write from others' experience mostly, Mike. Vi-care E-us Wolf

Date: 4/12/2022 3:37:00 AM

sounds nice, like another place to "lie low", lol

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/12/2022 7:10:00 AM

Hi, ho; hi, ho; I'm off to lie so low ~ Joe Biden, mendaciously