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His Moon, To My Sun

11/12/19 That night Breathless Cannot be Is it true? Are the stars aligned this time? My heart Almost stopped Taking the time To respond Not wanting to mess up Too good To be true Things going out Too well in my favor I breath in and out Let the moment come Naturally In its course Try not to Alter the red thread Baby As much as I wanted it then, I'm Desiring it In your eyes Under the moon and stars My intuition can never have Been too wrong His moon To my sun

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Date: 11/20/2019 7:45:00 AM
his moon to my sun...beautiful ending and beautiful words of love and romance....lovely poem sweet Rinnake… thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. x:-)-luloo
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Shimokini The Abendrot Poet
Date: 11/20/2019 8:40:00 AM
Thank you Lu Loo :)))))))))))))) It was lovely participating in your poetry contest :D Thanks again ;)))))
Date: 11/19/2019 10:47:00 PM
Hi Rinnnake congrats on your win
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Shimokini The Abendrot Poet
Date: 11/20/2019 8:38:00 AM
Hi Gregory! Thanks :D
Date: 11/19/2019 4:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win!;)
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Shimokini The Abendrot Poet
Date: 11/20/2019 8:38:00 AM
Thank you :))))))))))

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