His Moon, To My Sun

11/12/19

That night
Breathless
Cannot be
Is it true?
Are the stars aligned this time?
My heart
Almost stopped
Taking the time
To respond
Not wanting to mess up
Too good
To be true
Things going out
Too well in my favor
I breath in and out
Let the moment come
Naturally
In its course
Try not to
Alter the red thread
Baby
As much as I wanted it then, I'm
Desiring it
In your eyes
Under the moon and stars
My intuition can never have
Been too wrong
His moon
To my sun
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November 20, 2019 at 7:45 AM
his moon to my sun...beautiful ending and beautiful words of love and romance....lovely poem sweet Rinnake… thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. x:-)-luloo
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November 20, 2019 at 8:40 AM
Thank you Lu Loo :)))))))))))))) It was lovely participating in your poetry contest :D Thanks again ;)))))
Na Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 10:47 PM
Hi Rinnnake congrats on your win
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November 20, 2019 at 8:38 AM
Hi Gregory! Thanks :D
Chiri Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 4:21 PM
Congratulations on your top win!;)
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November 20, 2019 at 8:38 AM
Thank you :))))))))))
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