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His Last Ride

There was once an old geezer named Bernie, Who was nearing the end of life's journey. With a raspy voice he cried, "Life's been one helluva ride!" As he was whisked away on a gurney! Entry for Carolyn Devonshire's "Limericks Old or New" Contest

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Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 7/21/2018 8:33:00 AM

Thank you, Casarah - glad you liked it. Best to you - Bob

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/21/2018 7:24:00 AM

I like it! grats

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2018 12:14:00 AM

Good one, Robert. A big congrats to you.

Virginia Waters

Date: 7/18/2018 1:25:00 AM

haha great limerick -congrats

Eve Roper

Date: 7/17/2018 9:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your great well written win, Robert, :) enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/17/2018 8:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Cute! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/16/2018 4:57:00 PM

Really loved this one Robert, many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/16/2018 3:18:00 PM

Good one, Robert. CONGRATS! Janice

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/16/2018 12:23:00 PM

This us a gem Robert. Congratulations. Tom

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/16/2018 11:18:00 AM

Bob, I nearly rolled over when I read this, but feared I might have fallen off the gurney. LOL Congrats on your win! The competition was stiff and all the funniest poems, including yours, were in the top four. Hugs, Carolyn

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 7/16/2018 2:12:00 PM