His Last Days

There is something about palm branches,
The halleluiahs and hoorays
That separate Palm Sunday
From the following dark days.

They came en masse to laud him
With fever running high
They turned away to save themselves
When danger edged too nigh. 

Only a few would follow Him
As he walked towards his grave.
Only a few would honor Him
For coming to Earth to save.

Would you have been among the few
Who dared to call Him King?
Or among those who shouted crucify,
His unearned death to bring?

If I had lived in those days
And been blessed to see my Lord,
I pray I would have stayed with Him 
And heard His final word.

“Father forgive them, for they know not what they do.”

By:  Joyce Johnson 4/13/11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/18/2011 6:53:00 AM
How can you believe in something no one has seen before?? I like this nice job Joyce
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Date: 4/15/2011 10:09:00 AM
Beautiful flow, as I read it gave me goose bumps. I pray I would have had that measure of faith too.
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Date: 4/14/2011 11:44:00 PM
wow, Joyce, what an awesome post for right before this special time of the year. I believe you would have been among the followers!!
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Date: 4/14/2011 7:23:00 PM
As we celebrate this Sunday as Palm Sunday in Churches throughout the World Joyce these words ring true and remind us of the ultimate sacrifice of Jesus..on that Cross on Calvary..luv.. an exceptional piece my friend..
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Date: 4/14/2011 3:48:00 PM
Joyce, I never could understand how sentiments toward Christ changed so much after he was revered on Palm Sunday. I'd like to think I would have stood by him too. We have no way of knowing, but we can do our best to honor him now. Excellent poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/14/2011 1:30:00 PM
We have no idea what we would have done if we had been in there...I do know that it was not just them but my sins and the sins of the whole world that he bore..I can only love him for that deed that he did for me..Soup mail for you..Sara
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