Richard Lamoureux Poet Alliteration

His Hunger

Is he absurd to appreciate the abnormal?
Is it admirable to accept her appreciative acrobatic antics?
He's a cool cat, she's his celestial canary caught.
A kept creature can be clearly quite costly.
Young Brandon builds her his best beastly bordello.
Every excellent engineer emits erotic emotions.
Thankfully she is gorgeous, genial and generous.
Golden feathered gown shed, she's gracious and gratuitous.
Perfectly broken she's bouncy bendy and bodacious.
He puts her in his bird like cages, pays her his hurtful wages
She somehow helplessly hopes his hands will heal her.
As her inner Iris increases an iota, he explains why he's irritable.
Cock block knock stops the clock...,
she can't console him with candle lit canary kisses.
No more kink or cum cuz un-kindly doc chimes "she's contagious!"
Out the door on an orange overly dark morning.
He hungers for eggs over easy cause his mind is storming,
worrying about going back to a life that's boring. 
But soon a sexy new sparrow with opal eyes is his to order!


Written July 5th 2016 for a July contest.

For Broken Wings' I got Zero, Nothing Nada contest 2.

I thought about it for one day, wrote the next day and edited and revised on the third day.

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Eileen Manassian July 7, 2016 at 11:25 AM Back to thank you for visiting my older writes, Richard. I'm not fully back. Haven't had incentive to write, but you know that I will always check on you. You're my favorite poet, and well you know it. If nothing holds me here, I'll come back to read you. That's a guarantee. Hugs Richard Lamoureux July 7, 2016 at 11:31 AM You are missed! Hugs Rick.

Eileen Manassian July 6, 2016 at 3:11 PM I love how you reinvent yourself through your writing. You tackle deep topics through creative means, and I admire that in you. I'm glad that you pushed the limits here. Richard, you always give me the reference point I need for this place. :) Great write. Hugs Richard Lamoureux July 7, 2016 at 12:56 AM Hi Eileen, it's nice to have you back. Hugs Rick.

Tim Smith July 6, 2016 at 11:22 AM I like this take Richard. Usually we don't see the side of the cool cat only of the canary. Good luck... Richard Lamoureux July 7, 2016 at 12:58 AM Thanks Tim!;0)

Constance La France July 6, 2016 at 9:31 AM Richard, I like this write a lot, that's the way I write usually also , slowly over a few days, a winner to me ~ Richard Lamoureux July 7, 2016 at 12:59 AM Thanks Constance. The words presented some challenges but I think I pulled it together.

Daniel Turner July 5, 2016 at 3:08 PM Pretty saucy stuff Richard. My favorite line is Every excellent... Love that line. I also like how you pushed the barriers. Great write. Richard Lamoureux July 5, 2016 at 3:13 PM Thanks Daniel, I hope I didn't push the boundaries to far.

Charmaine Chircop July 5, 2016 at 11:42 AM Love both the alliteration and the story Richard..Its sad how The cat abandons the canary when she is so much in need , and after He used her so much.and its greedy how he goes for the sparrow...I wonder what follows next.. Hopefully he is not the carrier of that contagious desease. : ).Excellent poetry Indeed. Richard Lamoureux July 5, 2016 at 12:20 PM Hi Charmaine, this one is a bit on the strange side but it was fun to play with the words.

Casarah Nance July 5, 2016 at 8:34 AM Well... I am speechless...I never thought I would ever read you write cock block in a poem lol. You have shaken up my morning... in a good way... love to see where you take your... pen.. :) hugs x Richard Lamoureux July 5, 2016 at 8:52 AM Good morning Casarah, I did a bit more editing. Let me know what you think. Hugs Rick.