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His Fire and Her Ice

Orange and yellow Red and deep purple In the existence of Pure unlimited passion, Unpredictable mystery, And a shocking reality. His fire is unstoppable Even if he tried to stop His flames spread All through his strong heart. He deeply knows And clearly feels That his soul is made of Sun light rays. Blue and light green Brown and black Surrounding expectations of Unlimited romance Interrupted by the fear Of a wide eyed future And a bittersweet truth. Her Ice is unbreakable Even if she tried her best To make it melt The coldness spread All through her fragile heart But she never knew Or felt that Her soul is made of Silver moonlight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/15/2016 3:27:00 PM
kamal, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 11/20/2015 1:33:00 AM
Awesome write. SKAT
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Date: 3/22/2013 10:42:00 AM
a very very well written, i love your imagery and metaphor; a perfect writing. have you left the soup?
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Date: 12/13/2012 3:56:00 PM
I love these Metphors, what a wonderous Poem you have written. Well done.
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Date: 12/13/2012 2:57:00 AM
A lovely poem that you have done very unique, Omneya. - If it is for contest, I wish you luck and hope you win. - Now, as Christmas approached, I also wish you a nice and peaceful Christmas. - (Welcome to my Christmas poem) - Great Santa Claus hug from me to you / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/10/2012 11:18:00 AM
Amazing write as always Omneya! I love how you've equated fire to sunrays and ice to moonlight -clever. It's interesting that he knows what exactly he is about, while she doesn't have a clue what she's about, I'd associate it with the unpredictability of female emotions. Well written poem! Stay strong.
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