Omneya Kamal Poet Free verse

His Fire and Her Ice

Orange and yellow
Red and deep purple
In the existence of
Pure unlimited passion,
Unpredictable mystery,
And a shocking reality.

His fire is unstoppable
Even if he tried to stop
His flames spread
All through his strong heart.
He deeply knows
And clearly feels
That his soul is made of
Sun light rays.

Blue and light green
Brown and black
Surrounding expectations of
Unlimited romance
Interrupted by the fear
Of a wide eyed future
And a bittersweet truth.

Her Ice is unbreakable
Even if she tried her best 
To make it melt
The coldness spread
All through her fragile heart
But she never knew 
Or felt that 
Her soul is made of
Silver moonlight

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Beata Agustin June 25, 2024 at 2:26 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A February 15, 2016 at 3:27 PM kamal, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A November 20, 2015 at 1:33 AM Awesome write. SKAT

Dinda Minardi March 22, 2013 at 10:42 AM a very very well written, i love your imagery and metaphor; a perfect writing. have you left the soup?

Richard Lamoureux December 13, 2012 at 3:56 PM I love these Metphors, what a wonderous Poem you have written. Well done.

Anne-Lise Andresen December 13, 2012 at 2:57 AM A lovely poem that you have done very unique, Omneya. - If it is for contest, I wish you luck and hope you win. - Now, as Christmas approached, I also wish you a nice and peaceful Christmas. - (Welcome to my Christmas poem) - Great Santa Claus hug from me to you / / Anne-Lise :)

Vicky Tsiluma December 10, 2012 at 11:18 AM Amazing write as always Omneya! I love how you've equated fire to sunrays and ice to moonlight -clever. It's interesting that he knows what exactly he is about, while she doesn't have a clue what she's about, I'd associate it with the unpredictability of female emotions. Well written poem! Stay strong.