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His Eyes

His eyes are stars; An intimate eternity Of sea-soaked space. Endless waves crashing Into the sweet skin Beneath his jaw. His eyes are bottomless; Bounds of blue Bleeding onto my cheeks. His eyes are light; I am sun-starved shadow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/5/2018 10:06:00 AM
Back for another visit. Beautiful. Well done, Carissa.
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Date: 12/8/2017 3:22:00 AM
Carissa, I love that final couplet....well done.
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Date: 12/7/2017 11:23:00 PM
Wow - very sensuous. Beautiful, Carissa.
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Date: 5/9/2017 6:54:00 PM
Beautiful writing. I really enjoyed it.
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Carissa Marie
Date: 5/10/2017 9:01:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 5/9/2017 5:53:00 PM
A very beautiful way to describe someone's features. It goes far beyond the physical attributes of it all and expresses emotion while having a smooth groove. I enjoyed this one.
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