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His Discarded Love Letter To Her

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Flower, Dead, Wither, Rose, Death

His Discarded Love Letter To Her His love letter to her, quickly discarded didn't fill her envelope or her heart for his dying flame that never grew. And a match to candle brought little light. For a caricature of us, eleven months later, drawn by his voice brought shades darken, shapes drooping, mouths pouting. And the candle sits idle, next to Austin, her cat, sweet cat, no doubt catnapping of where he has been. It would have been good to see the curtain calling less the Ferris wheel spin, spin, spin and less cotton candy dreams caught in the mill of spite. And his sugarless face yearning for her smile. Knotted. But there were two lone souls birthed on a muted axis of mime and games pantomiming back stabs on faux dark clouds into each into mystery into each, repeatedly. Written words that choke life her written words demean the once blue skies known once upon a time, now he swallows sadly by default. connie pachecho 6/16/17

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Date: 6/16/2017 11:04:00 PM
Heavy duty, Connie, well done...
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