His Concern

A woman ran into the balcony
Husband ran behind yelling... “Stop, Honey
Why are you so dumb?
Kindly do not jump
Our car’s right below, think of the money”!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Laurie Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 7:31 PM
Hello Valsa ... humorous and witty, yet it is how some think - thank you Valsa - Lindsay
George Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 9:21 PM
Hi Lindsay, glad you enjoyed. Thanks a lot !
Wolf Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 5:49 PM
I think that for some husbands, you might title this 'Mixed Emotions:' On the one hand, she surely wrecked his car; on the other ... oh, let's not go there. (This actually is funnier with a mother-in-law substituted for a wife). Keep smiling, gw
George Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 9:19 PM
He knew she would wreck his car, as the lady was 'a heavy weight'.... Usually mother- in- law and son in law won't be that hostile....it is always mother- in - law versus daughter - in -law ! Thank you Gershon for your hilarious comment.
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 1:32 PM
HA, Love your humor, lady!
George Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 9:13 PM
Thanks a Lot Andrea.... Smile !
Cunningham Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 7:31 AM
Lol, can't damage the paintwork can we. Tom
George Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 9:13 PM
More than that, can't afford to a have a dent ! Thank you Tom~
Pandit Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 6:50 AM
No wonder she wants to jump--she knows where his mind is.
George Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 6:15 PM
Yes indeed ! A wife knows more than anybody where lies her husband's focus. Thanks a lot Vijay !
Buhagiar Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 1:29 AM
Oh this is too funny. Well done. ~~
George Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 5:13 AM
Thank you dear Victor ....
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