His Body

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                                              Like a large grand piano
                                           On which I play all the keys
                                             For his enjoyment I touch
                                                    Middle C, D, E

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James Fraser

April 11, 2010 at 5:35 AM

Kool form name Sara, with a wonderful poem to match >> James

John Freeman

April 10, 2010 at 10:37 PM

New form you spring on me Sara. I had to tak a look at this form. Looks like you have all your ducks urrrrrrrrr, syllable in a row. Awesome devotional in verse Sara! Smile. Agape, Moses

Gerard Keogh Jr.

April 9, 2010 at 5:40 PM

Which would be the first three notes of In My Life in the key of C, if I'm not mistaken. Nice image, this, I must say. I thasnk you for your kind words. I appreciate them. Regards, Gerard!

Lynette Chachere

April 9, 2010 at 5:28 PM

Leaves me to PONDER on such a musical and, im going to say a write that you desire for your musical notes..i sing on my own, so i study these things just because i want to, one day i will try the piano. Oooo, Mrs.Kendrick loves her big strong piano, may you always play the keys on his body!!<3 -Always&Forever Lynette

Debbie Guzzi

April 9, 2010 at 1:31 PM

ohhhhh lala! what a gem! Light & Love

John Trusty

April 9, 2010 at 7:08 AM

Sara, If C,D,E are "NATURAL," would "SHARPS" be followed by "FLATS?" LOV'd the imagery. JT

L'Nass Shango

April 9, 2010 at 6:01 AM

A musical imagery that sounds with passion ... and here I am meandering to the profoundness of this write. The poem shows off your intellectual merit, and your skill at the great craft. One love