His Body

. Like a large grand piano On which I play all the keys For his enjoyment I touch Middle C, D, E

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James Fraser

Date: 4/11/2010 5:35:00 AM

Kool form name Sara, with a wonderful poem to match >> James

John Freeman

Date: 4/10/2010 10:37:00 PM

New form you spring on me Sara. I had to tak a look at this form. Looks like you have all your ducks urrrrrrrrr, syllable in a row. Awesome devotional in verse Sara! Smile. Agape, Moses

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 4/9/2010 5:40:00 PM

Which would be the first three notes of In My Life in the key of C, if I'm not mistaken. Nice image, this, I must say. I thasnk you for your kind words. I appreciate them. Regards, Gerard!

Lynette Chachere

Date: 4/9/2010 5:28:00 PM

Leaves me to PONDER on such a musical and, im going to say a write that you desire for your musical notes..i sing on my own, so i study these things just because i want to, one day i will try the piano. Oooo, Mrs.Kendrick loves her big strong piano, may you always play the keys on his body!!<3 -Always&Forever Lynette

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/9/2010 1:31:00 PM

ohhhhh lala! what a gem! Light & Love

John Trusty

Date: 4/9/2010 7:08:00 AM

Sara, If C,D,E are "NATURAL," would "SHARPS" be followed by "FLATS?" LOV'd the imagery. JT

L'Nass Shango

Date: 4/9/2010 6:01:00 AM

A musical imagery that sounds with passion ... and here I am meandering to the profoundness of this write. The poem shows off your intellectual merit, and your skill at the great craft. One love

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/9/2010 4:16:00 AM

I am still shaking my head---but I like it.