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His Black Powder Cigar

Once had a boyfriend handsome,
    he had a black motorcycle that roared;
oh, how we soared down the highway wild and carefree,
      he loved black powder cigars and whiskey;
            I admit the smell was divine.

        Oh yeah, he was dark and tattered,
    wrapped in a cloak of smoke earthiness;
his gunslinger cigar was a mix of peppers and chocolate,
      deep and rich with a delicious sweetness;
           not to forget, he looked sexy.

        The years passed and we lost track,
    but I never forgot this handsome guy;
I heard that he had died of throat cancer from smoking,
         his black powder delicious cigar-  sad;
            that something sexy will kill.

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November 7, 2018


Poetry/Free Verse/His Black Powder Cigar
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1083-425-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Black Powder
sponsor, Anthony Slausen

Fifth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 11/28/2018 9:28:00 AM
Thank you Michael for visiting with congratulations, appreciate ~
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Date: 11/26/2018 9:48:00 AM
Laura thank you so much for visiting with the compliments and the congrats, appreciate !
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Date: 11/26/2018 12:25:00 AM
A wonderful poem, Constance, as your creative pen flows beautifully! Congrats on your win!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/26/2018 9:46:00 AM
Smile!
Date: 11/24/2018 10:16:00 AM
Thank you Eve for visiting with the wonderful and the congratulations, appreciate ~
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Date: 11/23/2018 7:16:00 PM
Wonderful write, Dear Heart, love the poem.. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 11/26/2018 9:46:00 AM
Smile!
Date: 11/23/2018 9:48:00 AM
Thanks Line for visiting and for the congrats, appreciate
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Date: 11/23/2018 6:35:00 AM
A fun read, Constance. Congrats on your win.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/28/2018 8:56:00 AM
:-)
Date: 11/9/2018 2:20:00 PM
Sun, thanks for the visit and comment, oh yeah I can see it expanded to a great country song ~
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Date: 11/7/2018 6:17:00 PM
Reads like a country ballad to me. Loved it.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/28/2018 8:57:00 AM
:-)
Date: 11/7/2018 12:24:00 PM
Sara, thanks for visiting and commenting, yes smoking sure causes a lot of death from cancer and related health problems, in youth people think it looks cool to smoke, and then they get hooked on the nicotine and cannot stop.
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Date: 11/7/2018 12:18:00 PM
Yes, some people get cancer from the use of tobacco..Sad that you lost a friend. I had cousins who were brothers and sisters four in a family, 3 died from cancer, two lung and one throat, and the other one had heart disease related to smoking. Sara
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Date: 11/28/2018 8:57:00 AM
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