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Hi-Poo Senryu

the loos crystal clean

but where the Cabinet meets

stench of corruption

                            
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moneysenryu

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Judy Ball

November 2, 2023 at 7:19 PM

Ohhhhhh! Nooooo! Cute one Paul. Quick grab the spray cleaner and just squirt away! God Bless, JB

Paul Callus

November 3, 2023 at 1:05 AM

Thank you for your pleasant reply, and the smile elicited, Judy :) Regards & blessings // paul

Andrea Dietrich

October 31, 2023 at 7:35 PM

this is VERY well done. Congrats

Paul Callus

November 1, 2023 at 11:40 AM

Thank you for liking and for the congrats, Andrea. ~ Best regards // paul

Linda Alice Fowler

October 30, 2023 at 4:15 PM

Back with big congratulations on your win Paul! :)

Paul Callus

October 31, 2023 at 7:25 AM

Thank you Linda for the visit and congrats :) Regards // paul

Jan Allison

October 30, 2023 at 10:40 AM

It's everywhere not just in Malta Paul!!love the place you took this one too, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

October 30, 2023 at 3:36 PM

Thank you Jan. I've been wanting to get this one off my chest; there are crooks everywhere!! :( Hugs // paul

Jack Horne

October 29, 2023 at 6:12 AM

ha ha ha, love this one, Paul

Paul Callus

October 30, 2023 at 3:37 PM

Thank you, Jack; glad you enjoyed. Hope you're keeping well, my friend. // paul

Richard Lamoureux

October 23, 2023 at 11:51 AM

My pleasure Paul. Thanks for your visit as well.

Paul Callus

October 30, 2023 at 3:34 PM

Always welcome to stop by, my friend // paul

Panagiota Romios

October 21, 2023 at 11:51 AM

I know what you mean, I think , about holding back and not posting, I, too, have done that, I betcha manny here have, Thi was a funny unique Senryu.)))))) Pangie

Paul Callus

October 23, 2023 at 9:19 AM

Thank you, my friend. Glad you enjoyed my humble little poem. Best regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

October 19, 2023 at 8:00 AM

Ha ha ha, I like your sense of humour.

Paul Callus

October 23, 2023 at 9:13 AM

Enjoyed your reaction, Richard; thanks for dropping by. // paul

Brian Sambourne

October 18, 2023 at 9:23 PM

Terrific, Paul. You've caught the stench of politics to a T. Even the title rhymes. Top notch. Be well. Brian

Paul Callus

October 23, 2023 at 9:05 AM

Thank you, Brian. Best regards // paul

Susan Ashley

October 9, 2023 at 9:21 AM

Whoa! Dear Paul, your keen intellect and expressive pen are not only golden but they are rapier sharp as well! An incisive piece that pierces through bureaucratic BS to cut to the bone. Love it! Great use of the title and poetic form. A potent little package of poetry, my inspiring friend. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan

Paul Callus

October 10, 2023 at 1:51 PM

Thank you dear Susan; your feedback is absolutely gorgeous. Yes...sometimes there is a need to use a sharp yet harmless rapier:) A Senryu offers that opportunity. Goodnight ~ warm regards & hugs, my friend // paul