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When I was young, my Grandpa sometimes used expressions that seemed corny at the time. “The Lord gave you two ears, but just one mouth” revisits me each time my face turns red because I used my mouth more than my ears. Fast forward fifty years. It’s very late. My aging bones won’t get the rest they crave until the lines my lamp illuminates convey precisely what I long to say. I then will lay aside my well-worn book and favored pen, released to seek sound sleep. Slight hints of Grandpa often make their way into my poems. Those, I plan to share with grandkids, who will smile and say, “That’s good,” but not with much conviction! They will learn— I hope—as I did, many precious gems lie waiting to be mined from “corny” lines composed by aging poets in the night. Date posted: June 25, 2020 Poetry Contest Title: The Old Scribe Placed 12th of 13 Sponsor: Craig Cornish

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Date: 7/28/2020 10:24:00 AM
This is such a touching memory Janice. Your muse reflects the wisdom and tender emotions behind the experiences. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/28/2020 10:42:00 AM
Thank you for this wonderful response, Aditi! Janice
Date: 7/24/2020 9:20:00 PM
Words of faithful wisdom woven into a beautiful tribute. Lately I find my mother's words spilling out of my mouth! Well said! Congratulations on your win!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/24/2020 10:18:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sam. Janice
Date: 6/25/2020 9:41:00 PM
Lovely penned, Janice! A tribute to you as well as your grandpa... Funny, my mom used to tell me the same thing about 2 ears and 1 mouth... Didn't help much 'til she was elderly though... Thanks, Gershon
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/26/2020 10:36:00 AM
Thanks so much, Gershon! :-) Janice
Date: 6/25/2020 3:22:00 PM
Those gems from the past stay with you all your life, I think folks back then had a lot of wisdom that they passed on to their children and grand children. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/25/2020 3:59:00 PM
Tom, thank you SO MUCH. Janice
Date: 6/25/2020 2:39:00 PM
Those gems from our elders made lasting imprints on our minds though we din't realize at the time. Simple, yet elegant write and message, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/25/2020 4:00:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
Date: 6/25/2020 1:31:00 PM
As my grandfather was illiterate (but smart enough to marry a schoolteacher) I know there is a vast library of common sense waiting to be written down, so go for it! Aloha! Rico
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/25/2020 4:00:00 PM
Thanks so much, Rico. Janice

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