Hints of Autumn

I     Clear Water Mirror

Clear water mirrors the trees;
caressing shades of green dress them still.
Of late, the evenings hold a chill;
the season bend approaches;
ending summer's stronger scented flowers
along the lane nod and point to God.


     II    First Tang of Leaves

Dying leaves' first tang tints the air,
crisp, pungent flavor of late August haze;
soon their fall will glaze the pond
with riotous, colorful display.
Nature raises her director's wand
and conducts the insects' praise.

© Faye Lanham Gibson, August 17, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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August 22, 2015 at 5:45 PM
Such lovely imagery Faye good luck in the contest:-) after a year jadazzle are finally reunited and writing poetry again - dreams do come true! :-) hugs jan xxx
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August 18, 2015 at 11:59 AM
A Beautiful, hints of Autumn, poem Faye. Loved it. Best of luck in the contest. ~~~Darlene
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August 17, 2015 at 3:56 PM
:) Such lovely images here, Faye. My favorite was the first two lines of the second stanza....glazing the pond...what a thrilling site. Good luck in the contest, and thanks for your lovely visit today. Hugs
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