Hint of His Scent

The hint of his scent invited me to enter a forbidden door, running male fingers along the fabric of my back…silhouettes melt on the wall; jealous stars drift afar as moonlight trails along with heaving sighs. And my cheery lips heat beyond eyes smoldering in flickers of candles lit, just there, I wished the fire of breath had more power over my bare heart to reject a desire to follow lure's command when temptation dares me to accede. Regina Riddle's Rejection Contest by nette onclaud
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Bordner Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 9:03 PM
A very romantic restraint Nette. Lust must be in tune with the eyes before passion can be sweetest. The balance between caress and control is so sensual in this poem of suspenseful passion. "Running male fingers along the fabric of my back..." Mmmm....that's beautiful texture. J.A.B.
Posey Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 9:17 PM
nette, You did it again..... You always capture the reader's attention with your creative genius..... Congrats and hugs.... Jake
Trichet Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 5:24 PM
powerful emotions displayed in such vivid poetic imagery again Nette, congratulations.
A. Sharma Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 9:07 PM
Wow Nette that's a lovely write wid powerful emotional words! Congrats on ur top place win!
Austin Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 3:28 PM
What sort of atmosphere next time? This one is complex, nette. I'll have to think it through later. Getting old. The mind is going, the body damn well gone. Love, daver
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September 12, 2014 at 10:37 AM
Hi Nette, Congratulations, with your awesome rejection poem.... LOVE LINDA
Richards Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 9:52 AM
There is always something uniquely captivating in every poem you write! Once again a big congrats to you, Nette!
Mehta Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 9:41 AM
Captivating romantic write, nette. congrats
Allison Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 8:18 AM
beautifully written as ever Nette many congrats Hugs Jan xxx
Lalion Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 8:17 AM
Portraying how you truly feel for this man in a tug-of-love, alluring way is sensational. Winning poem right on top. Congratulations, Nette
Andresen Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 7:19 AM
- Touching and beautiful poem, dear Nette !- Congratulations 1st PLACE !!!!!!!!!!!!!! - Wishing you a great weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 5:59 AM
Congratulations Nette on your 1st place. An awesome poem.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 10:50 PM
I just love this - It's amazingly beautiful - Love and prayers and God bless you, Gina
Ioane Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 10:45 PM
Another classic dear Nette, exquisite and a sensual mystique. My fave for today! Alofas, Tiaua..
Smith Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 4:22 PM
Oh Nette...you should pampered....hugs Tim
Em Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 2:03 PM
The uncertainty of love's reply delicately captured in this enticing poem. Give him a chance sans ego. I am mystified, Nette
Mcdaid Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 1:21 PM
very beautifully painted piece dear friend
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