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Hint of His Scent

The hint of his scent invited me to enter a forbidden door, running male fingers along the fabric of my back…silhouettes melt on the wall; jealous stars drift afar as moonlight trails along with heaving sighs. And my cheery lips heat beyond eyes smoldering in flickers of candles lit, just there, I wished the fire of breath had more power over my bare heart to reject a desire to follow lure's command when temptation dares me to accede. Regina Riddle's Rejection Contest by nette onclaud

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Date: 9/21/2014 9:03:00 PM
A very romantic restraint Nette. Lust must be in tune with the eyes before passion can be sweetest. The balance between caress and control is so sensual in this poem of suspenseful passion. "Running male fingers along the fabric of my back..." Mmmm....that's beautiful texture. J.A.B.
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Date: 9/17/2014 9:17:00 PM
nette, You did it again..... You always capture the reader's attention with your creative genius..... Congrats and hugs.... Jake
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Date: 9/13/2014 5:24:00 PM
powerful emotions displayed in such vivid poetic imagery again Nette, congratulations.
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Date: 9/12/2014 9:07:00 PM
Wow Nette that's a lovely write wid powerful emotional words! Congrats on ur top place win!
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Date: 9/12/2014 3:28:00 PM
What sort of atmosphere next time? This one is complex, nette. I'll have to think it through later. Getting old. The mind is going, the body damn well gone. Love, daver
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Date: 9/12/2014 10:37:00 AM
Hi Nette, Congratulations, with your awesome rejection poem.... LOVE LINDA
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Date: 9/12/2014 9:52:00 AM
There is always something uniquely captivating in every poem you write! Once again a big congrats to you, Nette!
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Date: 9/12/2014 9:41:00 AM
Captivating romantic write, nette. congrats
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Date: 9/12/2014 8:18:00 AM
beautifully written as ever Nette many congrats Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/12/2014 8:17:00 AM
Portraying how you truly feel for this man in a tug-of-love, alluring way is sensational. Winning poem right on top. Congratulations, Nette
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Date: 9/12/2014 7:19:00 AM
- Touching and beautiful poem, dear Nette !- Congratulations 1st PLACE !!!!!!!!!!!!!! - Wishing you a great weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/12/2014 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations Nette on your 1st place. An awesome poem.
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Date: 9/11/2014 10:50:00 PM
I just love this - It's amazingly beautiful - Love and prayers and God bless you, Gina
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Date: 9/11/2014 10:45:00 PM
Another classic dear Nette, exquisite and a sensual mystique. My fave for today! Alofas, Tiaua..
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Date: 9/11/2014 4:22:00 PM
Oh Nette...you should pampered....hugs Tim
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Date: 9/11/2014 2:03:00 PM
The uncertainty of love's reply delicately captured in this enticing poem. Give him a chance sans ego. I am mystified, Nette
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Date: 9/11/2014 1:21:00 PM
very beautifully painted piece dear friend
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