Him, Alone

Here he stands, in this place. 
But who is he? 
No name,
No identity.
I call him Joe,
He doesn’t know me,
He doesn’t know himself,
So, who is he?
His face is cracked by the years,
Age and wisdom etched those lines,
Wisdom that faded,
Age that pines.
He knows of loss,
He cries for his wife,
‘Where is she?’,
Such a sorry life.
And it fades from him,
Tricking away,
With the memories,
‘Will you stay?’
The misty blue,
Of his quivering eyes,
The pleading heartbreak,
That he cannot disguise.
I don’t know this man,
But, then nor does he,
So I sit for a while,
Just to make him happy.
And I know he won’t remember me,
He won’t recall my face,
He will only know the pain I leave,
When I have to leave this place.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/2/2010 5:56:00 AM
The sight of seeing an aged man so alone is saddening. Its sounds like a parent or spouse suffering from Alzeimers > sad, but nicely written >> James
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Date: 3/17/2010 3:30:00 PM
What a wonderful day it is today and it is a pleasure to have time to read some poetry today. I am happy that yours is amongst the ones I have read today Sarah. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/17/2010 1:31:00 AM
When was the last time we get a day in the sun, it is at our deepest depression or if we cheer up someone's lonely soul. Keep on sharing us inspirational write, Sarah. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/16/2010 7:21:00 PM
Very good insight, Sarah. Good write. Charles Henderson
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Date: 3/16/2010 6:51:00 PM
This is terribly sad, but I have seen it first hand, so I know how true it must be. Someone who sits alone, and will never know you were there. But at least you were someone who cared enough to remember him. Well written, Sarah. ~ Love, Carrie
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