Len Gasun Poet Concrete

Hilly Ice Cream In a Dish

HILLY ICE CREAM IN A DISH


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                           /)                  hot sunny                      >/<
                     SCOOP           afternoon, mom                W O W                
                   0000000       brought strawberry ice        OOOOOOO   
               00000000000    cream in my bedroom     OOOOOOOOO    
              0000000000000    Placed in a big dish    OOOOOOOOOOO
  So I gave her instantly my sweet hug and kiss. I took the strawberry on top,
   and jumped out of bed...danced hip-hop. While salivating midst sweating, 
                Hilly ice cream started melting. I ate one to two spoons,
                   Oh, what a a cool afternoon! Got another and put at
                              my tongue’s tip. Ice cream smeared 
                                     my face and all over my lips.
                              
                                     
                           July 15,2022     7.47 pm
  
Form: Concrete

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Bill Baker August 2, 2022 at 3:48 PM Now thta's the way to eat ice cream if you're looking for some fun! Bill Len Gasun August 6, 2022 at 7:39 AM Ha ha ha. Thanks a lot for your loving visit and your kind words my dear friend Bill. God bless you always. Hugs

I Am Anaya July 18, 2022 at 6:47 PM A ship filled with ice cream fun, sails made of words and digits, codes too! Concrete form looks like fun Len. Stay cool Len Gasun July 19, 2022 at 5:54 AM Thank you so much my dear friend Anaya for your comments and kind words. I really had fun writing this poem. I could say I was in my very playful mood that time, the reason perhaps why it didn't place ha ha ha. And I suppose to include my words a boat of ice cream but this will make my dish too deep in appearance. Thanks a lot again for your lovely visit. Visiting you soon. God bless you always dear friend. Hugs

Barbara Barry-Nishanian July 15, 2022 at 10:40 PM Len, thank you for visiting me, that's how I found this wonderful poem and your arty presentation. Seem like a winner to me in the contest. Best wishes! Barbara Barry-Nishanian July 21, 2022 at 2:19 AM I didn't place, also, but maybe another contest. Stay positive and keep writing. Len Gasun July 19, 2022 at 5:49 AM You're welcome my dear friend. Thanks as well for visiting me for the second time around and your uplifting comments. Your comment has given me enough consolation. May God bless you always especially in your writings. Best wishes always too. Hugs

Jeff Kyser July 15, 2022 at 6:13 AM fun write there! Len Gasun July 19, 2022 at 5:47 AM Thank you so much again my dear friend Jeff for reading my work and your uplifting comments. God bless you always. Hugs