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Hiku 9

blazing sun rivulets of sweat trickling cocooned in warmth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 7/3/2023 6:56:00 AM
Got that correct. Thanks for sharing this very descriptive one with us. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 7/2/2023 4:10:00 PM
Summer heat perfectly written Jo! Sitting here on a hot summer afternoon this haiku reflects my experience! Congrats and blessings Jo! So visceral.
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Date: 7/1/2023 7:21:00 AM
A great haiku depicting the heat of summer !
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Date: 6/29/2023 9:44:00 PM
Short and sweet, ( a bit of a cliche`) Yet so delightful, Joanna.
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