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Hiku 5

still water glowing in the sun ~ heron swoops down 12th May 2023

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Date: 5/14/2023 1:40:00 AM
Happy Sunday Joanna, A vivid haiku, concise, crystal clear with a delightful setting couched in vibrant imagery. Congratulations on your premiere placement. Warm regards Howard
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Date: 5/12/2023 2:00:00 PM
Very nice visual with this one, Joanna. Have a special weekend:)
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Date: 5/12/2023 4:01:00 AM
I got the whole picture in 9 words. Deftly written, Jo.
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