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Hiku 5 14 2025

* s E t d * N w r * * A o i * * L b * * P a n d a i c n l t o o u d t s h e U U P P And W A Y

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Date: 5/17/2025 7:58:00 PM
What a fun presentation ~ feels like a puzzle. Sweet ~
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Date: 5/16/2025 11:44:00 PM
One word I didn't quite get but it was a cool effect how all the words were leaping skyward
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/17/2025 6:02:00 AM
It reads: two birds and a plane/into the clouds/up up and away… Thank you, dear Andrea!
Date: 5/16/2025 6:50:00 PM
I like the double duty of the letter "A" at the end and imagine one could radiate more sentences from that point. The concepts of "away" and "a way" are acceptable interpretations also. Pretty Cool!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2025 7:39:00 PM
Thank you, Robert, and for commenting on that part. Originally I had a lower case “a” I felt like this pulled the eyes up, almost kite-like. :)
Date: 5/16/2025 12:52:00 AM
Oh, wow!! This is so cuteeeee!! Congratulations dear Kim.^___^ JCB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2025 7:18:00 AM
Thank you, JCB! :):):)
Date: 5/14/2025 10:30:00 PM
Terrific haiku, Kim! I really felt as if I were following the birds and the plane with my eyes! Very best wishes.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2025 7:18:00 AM
I love that and am so glad! It had its effect! Hugs
Date: 5/14/2025 9:39:00 PM
So very creative, dear Kim. I never knew, a haiku could be written this way.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2025 7:17:00 AM
It can be fun and liberating. Some kus are best left alone but some want freedom to…ahem…fly ;)
Date: 5/14/2025 3:32:00 PM
Hey, this is cute! Love how you can write well without always being serious. :) Hugs your "way"- <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2025 7:16:00 AM
Thank you, Paige! I am definately not serious all of the time. Hugs
Date: 5/14/2025 2:06:00 PM
Very creative Kim. You had fun writing this one.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2025 7:16:00 AM
I saw 2 birds and a plane, wrote the poem then it turned into this hiku :) It took shape! Hugs and thanks!
Date: 5/14/2025 12:02:00 PM
What a creative/fun write you have here. Love It... Have a fun day writing away............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2025 12:51:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/14/2025 11:01:00 AM
Your lovely hiku resembles stars. Well done. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2025 11:02:00 AM
Thank you, dear one!

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