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Hiku 5 14 2025

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Line Gauthier Date: 5/17/2025 7:58:00 PM What a fun presentation ~ feels like a puzzle. Sweet ~ Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/16/2025 11:44:00 PM One word I didn't quite get but it was a cool effect how all the words were leaping skyward Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/17/2025 6:02:00 AM It reads: two birds and a plane/into the clouds/up up and away… Thank you, dear Andrea!

Robert Warlov Date: 5/16/2025 6:50:00 PM I like the double duty of the letter "A" at the end and imagine one could radiate more sentences from that point. The concepts of "away" and "a way" are acceptable interpretations also. Pretty Cool! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/16/2025 7:39:00 PM Thank you, Robert, and for commenting on that part. Originally I had a lower case “a” I felt like this pulled the eyes up, almost kite-like. :)

JCB Brul Date: 5/16/2025 12:52:00 AM Oh, wow!! This is so cuteeeee!! Congratulations dear Kim.^___^ JCB Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/16/2025 7:18:00 AM Thank you, JCB! :):):)

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 5/14/2025 10:30:00 PM Terrific haiku, Kim! I really felt as if I were following the birds and the plane with my eyes! Very best wishes. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/16/2025 7:18:00 AM I love that and am so glad! It had its effect! Hugs

Valsa George Date: 5/14/2025 9:39:00 PM So very creative, dear Kim. I never knew, a haiku could be written this way. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/16/2025 7:17:00 AM It can be fun and liberating. Some kus are best left alone but some want freedom to…ahem…fly ;)

Paige Hind Date: 5/14/2025 3:32:00 PM Hey, this is cute! Love how you can write well without always being serious. :) Hugs your "way"- <3 Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/16/2025 7:16:00 AM Thank you, Paige! I am definately not serious all of the time. Hugs

Oliver Mckeithan Date: 5/14/2025 2:06:00 PM Very creative Kim. You had fun writing this one. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/16/2025 7:16:00 AM I saw 2 birds and a plane, wrote the poem then it turned into this hiku :) It took shape! Hugs and thanks!

Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/14/2025 12:02:00 PM What a creative/fun write you have here. Love It... Have a fun day writing away............ Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/14/2025 12:51:00 PM Thank you!

Victor Buhagiar Date: 5/14/2025 11:01:00 AM Your lovely hiku resembles stars. Well done. Hugs. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/14/2025 11:02:00 AM Thank you, dear one!