Get Your Premium Membership

hiku

Written: May 14, 2024, for contest by Brian Strand ******************* /I she's /I-------s /I c /I-------a /I f /I-------f /I o /I-------l d i n g her cool c h i l d h o o d memo r i e s ~ the first day of s p r i n g

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/17/2025 2:29:00 PM
How artistic is your pen in this one Sotto! Cool childhood memories of a life and such reflecting on these as scaffolding is perfect! Those experiences of the early years do indeed set up the framework in the building in life from childhood. I love this thought you have captured so brilliantly!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/16/2025 11:38:00 PM
Very inventive!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/16/2025 1:37:00 PM
Interesting layout. Reads like a possible contender to me. Way to go. Sara K
Login to Reply
Date: 5/16/2025 7:41:00 AM
Exquisite haiku!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/15/2025 3:15:00 PM
SP, too funny. I like the idea of scaffolding for good reason. If we can rebuild the relationship we have with our memories, we definitely can have great times in the preset. It's not so easy, but it is doable. Smiles!!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/15/2025 7:45:00 AM
Strand has invented this type of poetry. Best for a win.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/14/2025 3:37:00 PM
This is a beautiful haiku. :)
Login to Reply
Date: 5/14/2025 12:41:00 PM
What a creative/fun hiku write you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away...............
Login to Reply
Date: 5/14/2025 11:40:00 AM
This is cool, raising higher and higher on the ladder! i see the ladder ~ love it! xhugs
Login to Reply
Date: 5/14/2025 11:04:00 AM
- Awesome, Las :) - Good Luck :) - hugs
Login to Reply
Date: 5/14/2025 10:40:00 AM
Love it!
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things