Highway 85

I asked my husband what was wrong
He didn’t answer
 He just wiped his eyes and drove away
He left his wedding ring on the table
 
I strode out into the misty morning
 the sun fighting the sky for the stage 
 as a steady drizzle began
 I felt no rain
 
I went to the coffee shop and waited in line
 as I stared at the mirrors that refused to show my face
 The server took the order of the person behind me
I stormed out in a huff, my hands never touching the door
 
I wandered in the wispy morning light
A chill climbed up my spine
Those that walked passed me huddled closer
As if they too could feel my chill
 
I walked past my daughter's school
And waved back to her on the playground
Her friends weren’t playing with her
She must be very lonely
 
I found myself at the church
The shining white beacon in the sky
Beyond in the graveyard, I saw two new graves
I wondered who had died
 
A little way away I saw my childhood home
And for a moment I thought I saw
My dearly departed parents
Rocking in their old rickety chairs
 
I glide past the newsstand
I see a headline
“Mother and daughter dead in highway 85 crash”
And my heart hurts for the family

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 5/22/2020 2:17:00 PM
Jaycee, this starts out as a subtle mystery that builds with each stanza, and you leave sufficient clues along the way that nicely come together in the last stanza's plot twist. You are an effective story teller! ~Mark
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