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Higher Self, Higher Power

Yes, on the edge of death I've felt the window of eternity It wasn't a human personality But silence and ecstasy Too profound for words Was this a hallucination? Or this body kicking adrenaline From the impact Of the accident Either way Life still retains mystery Plenty of worlds to uncover For a heart so bold

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/15/2012 12:53:00 PM
Okay, first of all,....Let me roll out the red carpet for your grand appearance on the Soup!....Welcome, Justin!....Hope you enjoy your time here...it can be a haven of sorts...I read thru your titles and you seem to have a broad vernacular of topics which is great!...For added impact on this strong verse, try to write an haiku as a intro to your free verse...it will make it shine EVEN MORE! :) Gwendolen
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Date: 5/15/2012 12:52:00 PM
Okay, first of all,....Let me roll out the red carpet for your grand appearance on the Soup!....Welcome, Justin!....Hope you enjoy your time here...it can be a haven of sorts...I read thru your titles and you seem to have a broad vernacular of topics which is great!...For added impact on this strong verse, try to write an haiku as a intro to your free verse...it will make it shine EVEN MORE! :) Gwendolen
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Justin Debrosse
Date: 5/15/2012 12:57:00 PM
Aww, thanks for that lovely comment. Maybe you can teach me to write better

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