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High Spirits

sun’s
cascade
high spirits
trees on a hill
live lemony leaves
untroubled by darkness
inconsequential small world
worries pandering to the depths
the forest too bright and blithe to cry
hallelujah mount leads to heaven's gate

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2025

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Sara Kendrick Date: 3/4/2025 7:00:00 AM Dropping by to say congratulations on your winning work. So nice to see it in the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K Login to Reply

Howard Kerr Date: 3/2/2025 7:09:00 AM Hi Kim, Congratulations on your first place triumph on quality and merit. Excellent flow, amazing imagery and apt descriptions. Howard Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 3/2/2025 5:30:00 AM Kim, great imagery in your poem, congratulations on your first place win. Login to Reply

Oliver Mckeithan Date: 3/2/2025 5:29:00 AM Congrats on a well deserved high place finish Kim. Login to Reply

Paige Hind Date: 2/18/2025 8:42:00 PM Breathtaking, trees are close to my heart...:) you personified them really well Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/19/2025 5:02:00 AM I love trees too! So glad I have them. Hugs!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/18/2025 1:06:00 PM I don't know this picture but I can bet you described it very well. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/19/2025 5:01:00 AM Thank you, Andrea!

Hilda Greenhough Date: 2/18/2025 9:15:00 AM A great write that describes the path to heaven as a beautiful journey. Good luck with the contest. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/19/2025 5:01:00 AM Thank you, Hilda!

Tom Cunningham Date: 2/18/2025 7:29:00 AM Love the imagery Kim, the perfect world. Good luck in the contest. Tom Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/19/2025 5:00:00 AM Thank you, Tom!

Oliver Mckeithan Date: 2/18/2025 5:02:00 AM Beautiful poem Kim. Your use of imagery is excellent Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/18/2025 5:14:00 AM Thank you, Oliver!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/18/2025 4:27:00 AM - A peaceful and lovely picture, Kim :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/18/2025 5:14:00 AM Thank you, sweet lady!

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 2/18/2025 12:04:00 AM Your imagery always intense, your subject thought provoking, and your ending heavenly, hallelujah my dear friend Kim, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/18/2025 5:15:00 AM Thank you kindly, dear friend!

Mahtab Bangalee Date: 2/17/2025 10:54:00 PM superb imagery you've written,,,enjoyable Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/18/2025 5:15:00 AM Thank you, Mahtab!

Deb M Date: 2/17/2025 10:18:00 PM That is just lovely Kim beautifully worded! Debx Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/18/2025 5:16:00 AM Thank you, Deb!

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh Date: 2/17/2025 7:57:00 PM A nice interpretation of the painting by Gustave Baumann.Like it. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/18/2025 5:20:00 AM Thank you, Akham! Hope you looked up the painting. Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/18/2025 5:16:00 AM Thank you, Akham! Hope you looked up the painting.

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 2/17/2025 6:53:00 PM Yours is a beautiful interpretation, Kim. Love the imagery. :) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/17/2025 7:27:00 PM Thank you, Evelyn! Such a beautiful painting!

Abdullah Alhemaidy Date: 2/17/2025 5:14:00 PM Great Etheree! Thanks for sharing this great write! Have a nice day lovely Kim ~AA Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/17/2025 5:20:00 PM I appreciate you, Abdullah! Thank you!