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Pick-A-Title, Vol 43 - Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

Title #1: High Fidelity

April 15, 2024

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High Fidelity

Do you know my friend named Faith?
With trust in God, she treks through inconveniences,
stepping sprightly over them
with supreme optimism.

Smiling with ease, she saunters
along her life’s path, sure-stepping
for always she knows the way to go.
In the darkest of her days,
she still marches on;
a soldier of hope is she.
Some nights, she strolls, 
face toward the heavens,
searching for the Star of David
so keen are her convictions.

To her friends and family,
she is an angel 
ambling happily alongside them
and slowing down to lift them up
should they stumble and fall.

She loves her man
with the heart of a loyal lioness,
and he cannot help but reciprocate
her many kindnesses.
Do you know this woman?
Her faithfulness is to the sky,
for she’s got
high fidelity.
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Alex Avatar
April 25, 2024 at 5:15 AM
"She loves her man with the heart of a loyal lioness, and he cannot help but reciprocate" - A very beautiful poem. Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 2:49 PM
What a unique, beautifully composed personification poem on faith, Andrea:-) Love it! Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 3:22 PM
Thanks so much. I don't know anything about actual high fidelity!
Wolf Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 6:00 PM
Love your reinvention of 'high fidelity' Andrea. 'Out-of-the-box-ness' always welcomed by these eyes. ~ Soaring creativity, Gershon
Baker Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 4:28 PM
Great entry for the contest, Andrea, straight to my FAVs list! Thanks for sharing the "faith" with us. :-) Hugs, Bill
Dietrich Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 1:25 PM
wow, thanks.
Narain Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 11:32 AM
Beautiful poem on faith, Andrea.
Dietrich Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 1:25 PM
thanks, Jay
Romios Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 10:57 AM
A super pen at work, Such a powerful poem Best wishes, I say..,a winner! Pangiexx
Dietrich Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 1:26 PM
thanks, Pangie
Rodrigues Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 6:42 AM
Very nice, Andrea!
Dietrich Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 1:26 PM
thanks, Kim
May Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 6:17 AM
Beautiful write about faith Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 1:26 PM
thanks, Joseph.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 1:38 AM
Exquisite poem. You begin and end with a similar phrase, thus making a stress on the importance of having an angel who is most acceptable in these modern evil days. Hugs xx
Dietrich Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 1:26 PM
thanks, Victor
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