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hid'n 'neath thuh skirts

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                                   are hopefully
                           different       scantiez
                                        colour
                                        or not

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

March 11, 2026 at 11:14 AM

Hello James, So playful, almost breathless quality to how you’ve scattered those words across the page. By breaking the lines up the way you did, you’ve managed to mimic the actual visual hesitation of looking, where the "colour" is less important than the space between the words. Blessings, Daniel

James Peranteau

March 14, 2026 at 2:52 PM

so, 'tiz why i created my poetry form; "dip"...hopefully you have indulged it....you can find it in my list of poems that are listed in alphabetical order under; "Intro: New Form 'dip' part 1"...i've post'd, 1-6 thus far...there are 2more which I haven't post'd yet...i will presently (mine hour clock ")...I don't care for using punctuationz in mine writes...onez which cauze pauze or stop for sure...anywho...i think it's a guarantee pauze in uh dip...yuh think ') much love...oh yesss...pleaze read this recent write uv mine: "if'n yuh use uh phone tuh read me" post'd 3/8/2026

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