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Hideaway Nights

A drop of lonely floats into a never ending kiss lost folded notes play out in a rewind of time Shifting spells the chorus foreign answers ring -- an empty chair rocking through my mind Lay down your symphony where harmony rests a head pull back the covers slowly let me listen to what is said Colour wraps in soulful pace mellow light dances free belief waits for the butterfly as with truth sunsets will be

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Susan Ashley

Date: 8/26/2017 12:31:00 AM

Tim, your imagery is always amazing. A great write, lovely lines, beautiful words strung together like a strand of pearls.I truly enjoyed! :)

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 8/22/2017 9:55:00 AM

A great write Tim, I really enjoyed this poem!

Darren White

Date: 7/30/2017 1:08:00 AM

I love your poems, always, you're such a good poet. I also always notice your subtle use of extra spacing.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2017 8:08:00 PM

Lots of beautiful imagery, Tim. That is for sure.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/28/2017 12:25:00 PM

Beautiful. Beautiful. All I got to say :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/28/2017 12:02:00 PM

- What a fabulous piece my friend Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Ella

Date: 7/27/2017 10:27:00 PM

as with truth sunsets will be :) <3 Love this Tim

Lin Lane

Date: 7/27/2017 5:31:00 PM

I gather your mystery lady is abroad...not a 'broad.' lol I noticed you spelled it 'colour.' Your toes dangled in streams in the sunlight in another romantic write and now you hide away waiting for a sunset. Such beautiful lines, Tim..."A drop of lonely..." "belief waits for the butter as with truth, sunsets will be" Validation letters for my comment are "mmm" just like this poem.

Seren Roberts

Date: 7/27/2017 4:22:00 PM

wow Tim your muse is on a roll....loved it .....Seren.. fav plus 7

Akkina Downing

Date: 7/27/2017 4:09:00 PM

As with truth, this one is rocking my mind :) Fabulous one Tim!

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/27/2017 3:33:00 PM

Oh ok now Tim, you are on a roll. This one is another favorite for me too. What a line - Empty chair walking through my mind, and great ending too :)

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 7/27/2017 3:07:00 PM

Fave. My fifth of your work.

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 7/27/2017 3:06:00 PM

Beautiful. "an empty chair rocking through my mind" is awesome.

Tim Smith
Date: 7/27/2017 3:14:00 PM

Thanks Dale, you are too kind