Hideaway Nights

A drop of lonely  floats 
into a never ending kiss 
lost folded notes   play 
out in a rewind of time 

Shifting spells the chorus 
foreign answers ring 
-- an empty chair 
rocking through my mind 

Lay down your symphony 
where harmony rests a head 
pull back the covers slowly 
let me listen to what is said 

Colour wraps in soulful pace 
mellow light   dances free 
belief  waits for the butterfly 
as with truth   sunsets will be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ashley Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 12:31 AM
Tim, your imagery is always amazing. A great write, lovely lines, beautiful words strung together like a strand of pearls.I truly enjoyed! :)
O.J. Hunt Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 9:55 AM
A great write Tim, I really enjoyed this poem!
White Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 1:08 AM
I love your poems, always, you're such a good poet. I also always notice your subtle use of extra spacing.
Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 8:08 PM
Lots of beautiful imagery, Tim. That is for sure.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 12:25 PM
Beautiful. Beautiful. All I got to say :)
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 12:02 PM
- What a fabulous piece my friend Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ella Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 10:27 PM
as with truth sunsets will be :) <3 Love this Tim
Lane Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 5:31 PM
I gather your mystery lady is abroad...not a 'broad.' lol I noticed you spelled it 'colour.' Your toes dangled in streams in the sunlight in another romantic write and now you hide away waiting for a sunset. Such beautiful lines, Tim..."A drop of lonely..." "belief waits for the butter as with truth, sunsets will be" Validation letters for my comment are "mmm" just like this poem.
Roberts Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 4:22 PM
wow Tim your muse is on a roll....loved it .....Seren.. fav plus 7
Downing  Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 4:09 PM
As with truth, this one is rocking my mind :) Fabulous one Tim!
Sands Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 3:33 PM
Oh ok now Tim, you are on a roll. This one is another favorite for me too. What a line - Empty chair walking through my mind, and great ending too :)
Cozart Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 3:07 PM
Fave. My fifth of your work.
Cozart Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 3:06 PM
Beautiful. "an empty chair rocking through my mind" is awesome.
Smith Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 3:14 PM
Thanks Dale, you are too kind
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