Hide and Shriek

Ten-year Randi Clay
Just moved into town -
The town of Fear Street,
Where horror pulls you down.

Enormous, gigantic calendars
She sees, hung on her street
On October 10th is marked
In red  - ‘The Birth of Pete.’

She makes new friends at school,
And likewise - enemies too,
Who seemed to keep on saying,
‘Beware – He’ll get you! ’

Whenever asked “Who’s Pete?”
The children turned too pale,
But at last, quite surprisingly,
They began to tell the tale:-

 
"There was a boy called Pete,
A normal 12 – year old,
Until one day he fell so ill,
And caught a horrid cold.

Alas! One day he died,
And was buried in his grave,
They thought it was the end of Pete,
Grumpy, dull, but brave.

But right from that very year,
Pete gets up on the tenth,
And enters into other kids,
For using up their strength.

It is now an annual tradition
Of playing Hide and Shriek -
Whoever Pete makes ‘IT’
Is the new one from that week.

Randi, the risk for you is
Too real - Heaven forbid.
You’re new to Town Fear Street -
AND PETE DOES LIKE A NEW KID."

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 Based off the idea from an R.L Stine book
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 14, 2025 at 2:07 PM
Very well done. Enjoyed your poem and it was very clever -Dex
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March 14, 2025 at 10:59 AM
Wow! Amazing poem! Loved it thoroughly. Great thoughts and rhymes.
Greenhough Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 10:35 AM
Quite an amazing poem. The rhyme has great meter. I'll think of this one in October.
Bilverstone Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 9:48 AM
Ooo! Spooky! I like it!
Junaid Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 7:29 AM
Oooo this is pretty cool.
Inman Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 9:45 AM
Enjoyable story, a little dark, just the kind I like.
A  Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 1:36 AM
Nice to see this one again.. SKAT
A. Sharma Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 1:35 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write sneha!
A   Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 2:14 AM
Sneha, Congrats on Carol's story, poem CONTEST. Always ~~ LINDA ~~
A  Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 12:29 AM
SNEHA,, Congratulations on your awesome story win. Love SKAT
Allison Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 2:40 PM
You penned such a fine story Sneha dropping back again with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
A   Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 4:44 PM
I am Fine Sneha, thanks for the reply
A  Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 10:12 PM
Sneha, CONGRATS on your awesome placement ~ SKAT ~
Deschler Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 3:18 PM
I remember this great poem from my "Ghost Stories" contest. It was a personal favorite for me, because of my love for R. L. Stine! Congrats on the win and thank you for participating, Sneha!
Allison Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 3:02 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats Sneha:-) hugs Jan xx
A   Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 10:19 PM
SNEHA, Awesome Best of 2014 poem, and win.... Congrats.... Linda
Rv Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 11:19 PM
Thanks a lot, Linda! Hope you are fine - c: !
Kendrick Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 5:06 PM
Great winning work..Way to go with this one..Congrats..Sara..Creative way to use your inspiration from the book..
Rv Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 8:34 PM
Thank you so much!
Mehta Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 5:44 AM
A brilliant well penned, congratulations on this fine win, Sneha
Rv Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 8:26 PM
Thank you sir!
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December 18, 2014 at 1:19 AM
Enormous Sneha you make me wonder so mature.Love for win...rajat uncle
Rv Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 8:25 PM
Thanks a lot uncle!
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 2:49 PM
A very enthralling tale Sneha - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Rv Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 8:25 PM
Thanks, dear Jan!
Callus Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 9:04 AM
Well done, Sneha! It's a captivating tale that you tell here and the rhyming is very good. I was attracted straight away by the title...great play of words on a children's game. Congrats on your fine win. // paul
Rv Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 11:04 AM
Thank you so much for taking time to read my poems! c: Sneha
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 5:38 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Rv Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 7:29 PM
Thank you so much! c:
Deschler Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 3:26 AM
I'm a big fan of R. L. Stine and I can tell you are, too. When I was a kid, I read his entire series of Goosebumps books...I enjoyed this creepy write! Great work! Congrats on your win!
Rv Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 4:26 AM
Then we have something in common - I've read them all too!(Atleast I think I have!) Thanks a LOT for my placement! Sneha
Dietrich Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 3:11 PM
this is a GREAT spooky story that you emulated with your poem. WEll done!!! I really like it. keep writing . Enter lots of contests and do at least three new poems a week. that is how I ended up with so many poems since i began this 15 years ago. I still have many that were never posted here!! Good luck to you.
Rv Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 10:15 PM
Thank you! I will surely do that!!
Nance Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 5:15 PM
That is great, I used to love reading RL Stine books when I was younger, your poem sets a great mood for Halloween, spooky and satisfing
Rv Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 10:56 PM
Thank you! All the best for the contest!!
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