Hide and Shriek

Ten-year Randi Clay
Just moved into town -
The town of Fear Street,
Where horror pulls you down.

Enormous, gigantic calendars
She sees, hung on her street
On October 10th is marked
In red  - ‘The Birth of Pete.’

She makes new friends at school,
And likewise - enemies too,
Who seemed to keep on saying,
‘Beware – He’ll get you! ’

Whenever asked “Who’s Pete?”
The children turned too pale,
But at last, quite surprisingly,
They began to tell the tale:-

 
"There was a boy called Pete,
A normal 12 – year old,
Until one day he fell so ill,
And caught a horrid cold.

Alas! One day he died,
And was buried in his grave,
They thought it was the end of Pete,
Grumpy, dull, but brave.

But right from that very year,
Pete gets up on the tenth,
And enters into other kids,
For using up their strength.

It is now an annual tradition
Of playing Hide and Shriek -
Whoever Pete makes ‘IT’
Is the new one from that week.

Randi, the risk for you is
Too real - Heaven forbid.
You’re new to Town Fear Street -
AND PETE DOES LIKE A NEW KID."

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 Based off the idea from an R.L Stine book

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/14/2025 2:07:00 PM
Very well done. Enjoyed your poem and it was very clever -Dex
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Date: 3/14/2025 10:59:00 AM
Wow! Amazing poem! Loved it thoroughly. Great thoughts and rhymes.
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Date: 3/14/2025 10:35:00 AM
Quite an amazing poem. The rhyme has great meter. I'll think of this one in October.
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Date: 3/14/2025 9:48:00 AM
Ooo! Spooky! I like it!
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Date: 3/14/2025 7:29:00 AM
Oooo this is pretty cool.
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Date: 8/13/2015 9:45:00 AM
Enjoyable story, a little dark, just the kind I like.
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Date: 8/13/2015 1:36:00 AM
Nice to see this one again.. SKAT
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Date: 8/13/2015 1:35:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write sneha!
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Date: 7/14/2015 2:14:00 AM
Sneha, Congrats on Carol's story, poem CONTEST. Always ~~ LINDA ~~
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Date: 7/14/2015 12:29:00 AM
SNEHA,, Congratulations on your awesome story win. Love SKAT
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Date: 7/13/2015 2:40:00 PM
You penned such a fine story Sneha dropping back again with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/26/2015 4:44:00 PM
I am Fine Sneha, thanks for the reply
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Date: 2/15/2015 10:12:00 PM
Sneha, CONGRATS on your awesome placement ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 2/7/2015 3:18:00 PM
I remember this great poem from my "Ghost Stories" contest. It was a personal favorite for me, because of my love for R. L. Stine! Congrats on the win and thank you for participating, Sneha!
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Date: 2/7/2015 3:02:00 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats Sneha:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/26/2014 10:19:00 PM
SNEHA, Awesome Best of 2014 poem, and win.... Congrats.... Linda
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Date: 12/26/2014 11:19:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Linda! Hope you are fine - c: !
Date: 12/24/2014 5:06:00 PM
Great winning work..Way to go with this one..Congrats..Sara..Creative way to use your inspiration from the book..
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Date: 12/24/2014 8:34:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 12/18/2014 5:44:00 AM
A brilliant well penned, congratulations on this fine win, Sneha
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Date: 12/24/2014 8:26:00 PM
Thank you sir!
Date: 12/18/2014 1:19:00 AM
Enormous Sneha you make me wonder so mature.Love for win...rajat uncle
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Date: 12/24/2014 8:25:00 PM
Thanks a lot uncle!
Date: 12/17/2014 2:49:00 PM
A very enthralling tale Sneha - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/24/2014 8:25:00 PM
Thanks, dear Jan!
Date: 11/7/2014 9:04:00 AM
Well done, Sneha! It's a captivating tale that you tell here and the rhyming is very good. I was attracted straight away by the title...great play of words on a children's game. Congrats on your fine win. // paul
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Date: 11/7/2014 11:04:00 AM
Thank you so much for taking time to read my poems! c: Sneha
Date: 11/5/2014 5:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/5/2014 7:29:00 PM
Thank you so much! c:
Date: 11/5/2014 3:26:00 AM
I'm a big fan of R. L. Stine and I can tell you are, too. When I was a kid, I read his entire series of Goosebumps books...I enjoyed this creepy write! Great work! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/5/2014 4:26:00 AM
Then we have something in common - I've read them all too!(Atleast I think I have!) Thanks a LOT for my placement! Sneha
Date: 10/25/2014 3:11:00 PM
this is a GREAT spooky story that you emulated with your poem. WEll done!!! I really like it. keep writing . Enter lots of contests and do at least three new poems a week. that is how I ended up with so many poems since i began this 15 years ago. I still have many that were never posted here!! Good luck to you.
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Date: 10/25/2014 10:15:00 PM
Thank you! I will surely do that!!
Date: 10/24/2014 5:15:00 PM
That is great, I used to love reading RL Stine books when I was younger, your poem sets a great mood for Halloween, spooky and satisfing
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Date: 10/24/2014 10:56:00 PM
Thank you! All the best for the contest!!
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