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Hide and Seek of Nature

Flowers were snoring with sweet dreams, When the Sun's fingers woke them up; A symphony of birds-chorus, Like a concert, seemed to thrill up... Amidst summer's severe staring, Rain opened his tap so softly; A Ray-gleam joyously wetting… The breeze seemed to wipe her gently... Storm's wretched hand at such juncture, Snatched the small sachets of roses; Leaving the sunshine and shower, Lay cuddling into bird's nestles... Thunder smashed the sky; lightings laughed; Bamboos kissed and the flutes giggled; Weddings of clouds and vapors blessed; Heat flew fear-filled, dreams unfulfilled. ======== O Nature! Play this 'hide-and-seek', With my soul when she's sorrowful; That she might reach joy's highest peak, And dwell there, forever, blissful... “Let the floods clap their hands; let the hills sing together for joy” (Psalms 98:8) 23 May 2021 Personification Poem 150 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 5/25/2021 10:40:00 AM
A delightful poem... Great personification... God bless... ~ Ani
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/27/2021 10:45:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 5/23/2021 1:00:00 AM
You make nature a part of you bringing in joys of creation.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/23/2021 1:16:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 5/22/2021 8:19:00 PM
Nice job with the personification of nature, Christuraj. Enjoyable read.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/22/2021 10:03:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 5/22/2021 4:35:00 PM
Christuraj, I like your personification of all the elements of nature in your poem! Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/22/2021 10:04:00 PM
Thank you very much. I learn from you so many things. Thank you for teaching me various techniques.

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