Hide and Seek of Nature

Flowers were snoring with sweet dreams,
When the Sun's fingers woke them up;
A symphony of birds-chorus,
Like a concert, seemed to thrill up...

Amidst summer's severe staring,
Rain opened his tap so softly;
A Ray-gleam joyously wetting…
The breeze seemed to wipe her gently...

Storm's wretched hand at such juncture,
Snatched the small sachets of roses;
Leaving the sunshine and shower,
Lay cuddling into bird's nestles...

Thunder smashed the sky; lightings laughed;
Bamboos kissed and the flutes giggled;
Weddings of clouds and vapors blessed;
Heat flew fear-filled, dreams unfulfilled.

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O Nature! Play this 'hide-and-seek',
With my soul when she's sorrowful;
That she might reach joy's highest peak,
And dwell there, forever, blissful...

“Let the floods clap their hands; let the hills sing together for joy”
(Psalms 98:8)


23 May 2021
Personification Poem 150 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 5/25/2021 10:40:00 AM
A delightful poem... Great personification... God bless... ~ Ani
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/27/2021 10:45:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 5/23/2021 1:00:00 AM
You make nature a part of you bringing in joys of creation.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/23/2021 1:16:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 5/22/2021 8:19:00 PM
Nice job with the personification of nature, Christuraj. Enjoyable read.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/22/2021 10:03:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 5/22/2021 4:35:00 PM
Christuraj, I like your personification of all the elements of nature in your poem! Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/22/2021 10:04:00 PM
Thank you very much. I learn from you so many things. Thank you for teaching me various techniques.
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