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Hidden Treasure - Mia

H idden within its pages you will find I mmense riches that will transform your mind, D eep, buried deep is true wisdom refined, D elve into its core meaning well-defined, E nigmatic stories with lessons lined, N ow within your reach, are you so inclined? T eacher Divine, it is sure to spellbind, R enewing your soul and all of mankind, E xamples of yore that serve to remind A ll this world will one day be left behind, S tandards for everyone, 'tis mastermind, U ncovering the fact that humankind R equires God to open spirit's eyes blind, E nshrouding us with precious peace of mind. 09.02.2021 Form: Acrostic monorhyme 10 syllables per line For Kim Rodrigues' "Message in an acrostic 2" contest

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Date: 9/18/2021 6:40:00 PM
Hi Jo, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write;-) Alexis
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Date: 9/18/2021 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Hidden Treasure" is a creative/wonderful write. "Love it" Have a blessed day/weekend..............
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Date: 9/18/2021 4:24:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... Both the obvious and hidden messages are God-exalting and faith-edifying. God bless you.
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Date: 9/17/2021 1:24:00 PM
wonderful message Jo, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/17/2021 11:24:00 AM
Very clever and most creative Jo - there is hidden treasure in God's word meant to enrich us every day. Congratulations on your win! Blessings of the "word" to you!
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Date: 9/17/2021 7:29:00 AM
Expressive, reverent, skillfully written piece. CONGRATS, Jo! Janice
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Date: 9/17/2021 1:59:00 AM
Great job Jo - Read the Word of God and follow it - congrats
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Date: 9/16/2021 8:14:00 PM
Truly, the world needs to grab onto the hidden treasure of the Word of God! Congratulations, Jo!
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Date: 9/5/2021 12:39:00 PM
Great acrostic piece Jo, good line of thought with fine rhyme and flow too. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 9/4/2021 8:08:00 AM
beautiful write indeed
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Date: 9/4/2021 5:37:00 AM
Absolutely gorgeous, dearest, Jo! Good luck! Hugs xxx
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Date: 9/2/2021 10:49:00 PM
Aww... This is just awesome Jo... You did the acrostic monorhyme very well... Hope it places high... Am yet to think what to write... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/2/2021 12:37:00 PM
Excellent double acrostic. Best for a win.
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Date: 9/2/2021 7:13:00 AM
Jo, this is exceptional--so skillfully written, deeply reverent, and expressive! Janice
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Date: 9/2/2021 6:27:00 AM
WoW! Jo, You did a great job with contest challenge. Good hidden message as well. I agree, reading the word of God can make one very rich. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/2/2021 5:49:00 AM
Love the hidden message Jo, this looks complicated to do. Well written. Tom
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Date: 9/2/2021 5:41:00 AM
Excellent! Well done :)
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Date: 9/2/2021 4:51:00 AM
So true Jo, Very nicely penned
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