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Release the pain brought on by thoughtlessness, One silly refrain Can hurt, it's so senseless. Bitter words spoken can't be retracted. Hearts that are broken cannot be reactivated. Live life be happy is how it should be, not being snappy making ones life unhappy. With a smile in your voice you would be surprised Might subdue their thoughts of malice So they are not realised When you're alone, full of strife Don't think bitter thoughts, look for the rainbow in your life follow it's path.. find what you've sort May not be a pot of gold at the end of this light, look for a different treasure you alone can create.....called peace
Penned 1/04/2017
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Date: 4/1/2017 9:47:00 PM
Seren this is really beautiful, more so because I know you and know this is not only a poem, but its how you live and feel! I know you dont speak up often, but you speak with a strong voice! Loved this!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/2/2017 4:48:00 AM
thank you for your kind words, glad the poem was ok....Seren
Date: 4/1/2017 2:44:00 PM
That is so helpful, difficult too, but so positive. I know these thoughts :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/1/2017 4:51:00 PM
Hi Darren, so pleased you stopped by and approved of my poem ...Seren x
Date: 4/1/2017 12:36:00 PM
Very nice , encouraging poem. I like the positive message. Well done :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/1/2017 4:50:00 PM
So kind of you to comment, glad you liked it...Seren
Date: 4/1/2017 11:54:00 AM
I love this...what a great message it delivers...peace
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/1/2017 4:49:00 PM
hi Tim thanks for stopping by...Seren
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