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Hidden Key

Poets Dreamers We dream with eyes open Manipulators of time and space Masters of imaginary universes Warriors Lovers Healers Nothing is beyond our reach Pen in hand Heart allowed to flow free Words the oxygen we breath Dark Hopeful Philosophers of our day Pointing the way Wishing to be heard Will others see beyond the words To where the wisdom lay We all have our roles to play So yes we dream With our open eyes Hoping others realize We don't wish to disguise Yet sometimes hearts lie If you look underneath The metophor You will find a key to the hidden door In the end Thats all we are asking for

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/14/2017 7:16:00 AM

Great poem, and even greater wisdom dispensed from your masterful pen, Richard. Soul searching premium grade lines dispersed throughout ... words are the oxygen we breath ... if you look underneath the metaphor ... just a seamless stitched cloth of truth woven by you. Brilliant message poem. Love and peace always.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/14/2017 8:00:00 AM

Thanks Freddie.;0)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/2/2015 10:07:00 AM

My muse has not abandoned me, I am just at a loss for time to sit down and write. Thanks for concern and encouragement.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/2/2015 9:23:00 AM

Oh, Richard....So glad to read the heartfelt honest in this write. I'm waiting for something new from you.....Come on, please....you can do it. I wish I could play the part of your muse and give you some thought to write about....If only. Hugs

Carol Eastman

Date: 5/6/2013 6:31:00 PM

You make such impressive works look very simple. You have a gift... I'm sure you've worked steadily to improve.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2013 7:01:00 PM

Thanks again. I have seen a change in my writing since joining the soup. I haven't had any writing training so this has been an education of sorts.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 5/4/2013 11:29:00 PM

And u poet have d key to poetic treasures as yor poems r fantastic. I so admird dis one too. Cheers n tnx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/5/2013 6:39:00 AM

Thanks S.zaynub

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 5/4/2013 10:41:00 PM

Great one, Richard. "We all have our roles to play". Agreed. Enjoyed!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/5/2013 1:00:00 AM

Thanks so much Toquyen. I appreciate your visit.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/4/2013 4:29:00 PM

Another to my favs, Richard. This is so expressive of those of us who need words to stay alive.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/4/2013 7:04:00 PM

Thanks Eileen, it is the air we breath.

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 5/4/2013 2:29:00 PM

This a beautifully written piece. I particularly liked following line: Words the oxygen we breath

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/4/2013 7:05:00 PM

Thanks Ndaba, I like that line as well.

Donna Jones

Date: 5/4/2013 10:59:00 AM

Yes those hidden things...I guess we'd just explode if we didn't write!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/4/2013 1:04:00 PM

That would not be pretty, an epedemic of exploding poets.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/4/2013 10:29:00 AM

Dreaming with eyes open... wow, I really liked that line! Those that don't write can look at poetry as just make belief, but I've heard someone say that the fictional movies often hold more truth than the daily news. We at times dress it up to make it interesting to read, but beyond the words there's so much more we are trying to say. Awesome work, especially the last stanza!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/4/2013 1:05:00 PM

you are probably right, as they say art imitating life.

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 5/4/2013 7:25:00 AM

Let it flow, Richard. Your words will outlive you. Nice read. :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/4/2013 7:47:00 AM

Perhaps not, I plan to live forever. Thanks for your kind words.