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Hidden Glen

tall stands the buck guarding troth of loins no spore of man long flies the bullet death silently comes ~//~ 4-5-4-5-5 (23) © Sept 25 2010 Charles Henderson 5 th in Chris's Tanka contest

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/10/2010 5:29:00 PM

love the cutting line! Congrad's & Thanks for all your nice comments. Light & Love

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/7/2010 8:22:00 AM

wonderful tanka, congrats on your win in the contest

John Freeman

Date: 10/6/2010 5:05:00 PM

Congratulations Charles on your poem's top ten spot. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/6/2010 3:23:00 PM

Congrats Charles on your super win in Chris's contest with this excellent Tanka entry.. enjoy your sweet victory today my friend with luv...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2010 2:49:00 PM

I just love those last two lines of this one. Great topic!! Congrats, Andrea

James Fraser

Date: 10/6/2010 12:54:00 PM

Many congratulations Charles on your win in Chris's contest with this exceptional Tanka >> James

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/6/2010 11:34:00 AM

Charles super congrats on your win in Chris's contest ;)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/6/2010 10:48:00 AM

Man certainly has the advantage in the killing game. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/6/2010 10:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Charles in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "T(h)anka You". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/6/2010 5:56:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win, Charles

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/6/2010 1:37:00 AM

enjoyed this wonderful entry, congrats in this placement Charles. Harry

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/6/2010 12:02:00 AM

Congrats Charles on your win-- this sure came across as quite vivid for me-- such a shame really when animals die this way--congrats again-- nikko :)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/28/2010 4:30:00 PM

well written...my husband likes to hunt the pea eaters!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/26/2010 4:41:00 PM

Awww, this one is sure sad, Charles. But that last line is stunning. LUv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/26/2010 12:14:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with this write about a love that some people for the sport of hunting..Reads like a winner...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/26/2010 12:09:00 PM

Indeed, the animals never know when man will strike, Charles. For them, death by the bullet comes both suddenly and "silently." Excellent entry for Chris's contest. Wishing you success, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/25/2010 10:00:00 PM

Sad the hunters kill these beautiful animals... u have expressed so well Charles... this tale..in your Tanka tonight luv...