Get Your Premium Membership

Hidden From Time

Beyond those hills lie the mysteries of a small community hidden from time. Little has changed in the past fifty years, if one does not consider the paved road or the telephone lines, some of the few remaining party lines in the country -- Yes! If you stand underneath them you can hear the noisy chattering of gossipers exchanging notes about their neighbors, or, arranging interesting tripartite trysts. Sometimes the sound of a zither plucked, or an old wringer washer chugging along [if it’s a Monday morning]; you can hear a faint whistling of undetermined origin. Everyone knows everyone else and kin who have not left for Ohio since the 50s, while old, uninhabited houses crumbled into dust, including one where I was born on a snowy winter’s day in bleak December.
Written August 8, 2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/12/2022 9:11:00 PM
"some of the few remaining party lines in the country -- Yes! If you stand underneath them you can hear the noisy chattering of gossipers exchanging notes about their neighbors," This reminds me of the old phone lines where you shared. My grandmother would yell "Mable, get OFF the line! "
Login to Reply
Date: 8/8/2022 8:50:00 PM
I enjoyed this nostalgic trip down Memory Lane, Milton. Very well written and interesting! :)
Login to Reply
Hankins Avatar
L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/9/2022 8:16:00 AM
Thanks so much, Evelyn. I'm so happy you enjoyed it.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things