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Hidden Desires

My fantasies are lost; Into the wild I could not chase. Closing my eyes, I desired for your touch. I felt your fingers running through my hair. I shivered to your soft lips touching my skin. I longed for your kisses. Drawing me closer and closer, A vision of flaming red sheets in the air - I followed your scent. In your black, rolled up, half buttoned shirt and jeans, You light the burning fire in me. And into your blue eyes, I fully submit. You pulled and pushed me; walls against my back. Sending chills once more, your face touched my cheek; I heard your silent whispers of want. You grabbed my hair and our hearts raced. Without a beat skipped, I drowned. To your vigorous, passionate kiss; I responded. To your soft, powerful touch; I melted. To your breaths, I surrendered.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/14/2015 2:16:00 PM
I really like how this sounds....but there is one thing I found....and it left me so astound....my eyes are blue, they are brown....lol
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 10/15/2015 12:53:00 PM
Hahahaha I bet they are
Date: 10/12/2015 10:39:00 AM
Hi Sarah! With words you stoke the embers of desire, then you drift off, leaving the rest to the readers' imagination. Very well expressed! #7 // paul
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 10/13/2015 2:46:00 AM
Hi Paul! I was somehow afraid my thoughts won't be able to reach the readers as I felt I have not truly expressed them, but I guess they did haha. Thank you for passing by :)
Date: 10/11/2015 9:11:00 AM
oh..so touchy. I feel it. a nice romantic poem. big ups
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 10/12/2015 2:12:00 AM
im glad you like it :). Thank you :D

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