Hidden Desires

My fantasies are lost;
Into the wild I could not chase.
Closing my eyes, I desired for your touch.
I felt your fingers running through my hair.
I shivered to your soft lips touching my skin.
I longed for your kisses.

Drawing me closer and closer,
A vision of flaming red sheets in the air -
I followed your scent.
In your black, rolled up, half buttoned shirt and jeans,
You light the burning fire in me.

And into your blue eyes, I fully submit.
You pulled and pushed me; walls against my back.
Sending chills once more, your face touched my cheek;
I heard your silent whispers of want.

You grabbed my hair and our hearts raced.
Without a beat skipped, I drowned.
To your vigorous, passionate kiss; I responded.
To your soft, powerful touch; I melted.
To your breaths, I surrendered.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/14/2015 2:16:00 PM
I really like how this sounds....but there is one thing I found....and it left me so astound....my eyes are blue, they are brown....lol
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 10/15/2015 12:53:00 PM
Hahahaha I bet they are
Date: 10/12/2015 10:39:00 AM
Hi Sarah! With words you stoke the embers of desire, then you drift off, leaving the rest to the readers' imagination. Very well expressed! #7 // paul
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 10/13/2015 2:46:00 AM
Hi Paul! I was somehow afraid my thoughts won't be able to reach the readers as I felt I have not truly expressed them, but I guess they did haha. Thank you for passing by :)
Date: 10/11/2015 9:11:00 AM
oh..so touchy. I feel it. a nice romantic poem. big ups
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 10/12/2015 2:12:00 AM
im glad you like it :). Thank you :D
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