Hidden Dangers

She wandered slowly through the woods,
Admiring bluebells, ferns and trees;
The sound of birdsong in her ears,
Accompanied by buzzing bees.

She sat beside a little stream
And watched the fishes swimming by,
The water tasted fresh and cool -
Such beauty made her want to cry.

But pungent garlic plants around
And insects crawling, biting now,
The adders hissing in the grass,
All made her feel on edge somehow.

She wondered where the stream would lead
And wasn’t sure which trail to take;
The sun was fading, she was lost -
She thought she even saw a snake.

She heard the sound of snapping twigs
And then a hulking shadow loomed,
She turned around and stared in fear:
Struck dumb, she knew that she was doomed…

Jack Horne for Francine’s Nature Tale contest
8th October
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Lane Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 1:15 PM
Every time mankind crosses into nature....
Jones Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 12:52 PM
yep, fear's a doomer. very sad. nice write, jack, beauty day to ya!~N
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