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Hidden Beauty

A garden presents a most beautiful sight When seen from afar in a much broader light, For there in a setting with all that surrounds, Its total of beauty and color abounds. To observe much too closely, study and dwell, Inspect every flower and leaf very well, Will quickly cancel the powerful presence Of unified form with divergent essence. Then we are bound to observe those objections— The scattered, meaningless small imperfections Of petals and blossoms and leaves not so fair; Lose sight of the wonderful whole that they share. We can also apply this to those we love, And sometimes must separate, step back enough, To view the grand total of gifts which combine To create an image of balanced design, And appreciate well those colors which are A bit subtle up close but strong from afar. So trite imperfections get lost in the ray Of the aura of wholeness seen from away. And so like the grand garden’s totality, When we stand back to thoroughly look and see, We will vision with awe a marvelous view… Total beauty and depth now perceived anew. Sandra M. Haight ~1st Place~ Contest: Hidden Beauty Sponsor: Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Judged: 02/04/2015 Quote: Ralph Waldo Emerson “Every particular in nature, a leaf, a drop, a crystal, a moment of time is related to the whole, and partakes of the perfection of the whole.”

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Date: 4/26/2017 9:22:00 AM
I was reading through garden poems and came across this beauty Sandra. A belated congratulations on your first place win. I have to put this in my faves! 7 ; )
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Date: 2/15/2015 10:52:00 AM
Sandra, Congratulations on the win. *Skat *
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Date: 2/6/2015 10:25:00 PM
How nice the way you reflected Emerson's thoughts with your beautiful writing, dear. BIG congrats on your win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/8/2015 5:29:00 PM
Andrea, thank you so much for your positive comments. I really value them so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/5/2015 7:49:00 AM
I am so happy this wonderful poem is in first place Sandra. Big congratulations!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/5/2015 6:59:00 PM
Thank you, Connie, for your support and nice comment! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/5/2015 2:03:00 AM
This is excellent, Sandra...there is beauty everywhere, although many fail to notice its existence. Even 'imperfections' have their good points. Lovely metaphor and rhyme. Congrats on being first in this contest. // paul
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/8/2015 5:34:00 PM
Thank, Paul. for your much valued comments and congrats. I really appreciate it. Sandra
Date: 2/4/2015 8:39:00 PM
A well done #1 polished to perfection! Congrad's Light & Love
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2015 9:04:00 PM
Thank you, Debbie. I really appreciate your supportive comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/4/2015 11:21:00 AM
So so beautiful Sandra - sorry I missed commenting on this earlier:-) many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2015 6:30:00 PM
Hi Jan, thank you for stopping by with your comment and congrats! I really appreciate it. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/20/2015 12:37:00 PM
Your poem is so beautiful in content and imagery with the nuance of metaphorical meanings embraced as well! I see this one coming in as a number one! A fantastic entry Sandra, that I am fav'ing! #7
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/21/2015 11:36:00 AM
Hi Connie, I really appreciate your stopping by with your positive comment and support. Thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/20/2015 6:29:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry..The couplets are wonderful in rhyme and rhythm..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/21/2015 11:36:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sara. I always appreciate your nice comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/19/2015 8:22:00 PM
Wonderful, you have a spectacular way with words! Always a pleasure reading you!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/21/2015 11:38:00 AM
Casarah, thank you so much for your encouraging comment on my poem. It means a lot to me. Hugs, Sandra

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