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Hidden

Made in God’s image, we’re light, vibrant by day and by night, veiled by cravings of ego, which we are loathe to forgo. Truth remains from us hidden, until we do as bidden, head-heart aligned, oozing love, invoking grace from above. To become love enabled, ego must be disabled, whereupon delusion shed, we are by our conscience led. All of us were born like this, pure of heart and drenched with bliss but then by desires bemused, mind slowly became confused. The truth that’s veiled may be seen, being simply, our soul’s sheen; if we but choose to be still, voids within with bliss will fill. Upon knowing who we are, we cease to struggle and spar, breath by breath, coming undone, recognising all are one. There’s nothing we need to do, save letting love throbs renew. We are, as we are, complete, luminous soul, bliss replete.

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Date: 7/21/2023 1:59:00 PM
Seeker, wonderfully penned, I loved this poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge H Words !
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Date: 7/21/2023 10:56:00 PM
Thanks for hosting, Constance ~ big effort.
Date: 7/7/2023 3:53:00 PM
thanks for sharing your words US, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/7/2023 5:54:00 PM
Thank you, Jan :)
Date: 7/4/2023 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Hidden" is a wonderful write/picture. Enjoyed It. Have a blessed/great day.................
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Date: 7/7/2023 5:53:00 PM
Hope you are enjoying your weekend, Darlene
Date: 7/4/2023 7:14:00 AM
The inherent veracity and luminosity dwelling within our souls become obscured by the all-encompassing ego and insatiable cravings of the world. Allow me to extend my heartfelt felicitations on your triumphant contest win.
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Date: 7/4/2023 7:17:00 AM
Thank you, dear SP. I’m overwhelmed by your praise
Date: 7/4/2023 5:58:00 AM
- A pleasure to read again... congratulations on your win in the contest, U.S. :) - hugs
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Date: 7/4/2023 7:16:00 AM
Thank you, dear Anne Lise
Date: 7/3/2023 4:28:00 AM
The truth and light within us are veiled by ego and overriding wordly desires. Once we shed our ego, 'voids within with bliss will fill'. So beautiful
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Date: 7/3/2023 9:46:00 AM
That’s it! Now, to shed the ego (identity) we must …..(please fill in the blanks!)
Date: 7/2/2023 7:43:00 AM
Indeed God's Love for us is so bright that on earth it is hidden from us. Well written Seeker.
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Date: 7/2/2023 10:53:00 AM
Ego is the veil, self-imposed.
Date: 7/2/2023 4:35:00 AM
So interesting with light... God bless you with love, Gina
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Date: 7/2/2023 10:52:00 AM
Thank you, dear Gina. The Self in singularity is soft white self-existent, pulsating light :)
Date: 7/2/2023 3:26:00 AM
- Words of truth...lovely written U.S. - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 7/2/2023 10:52:00 AM
Thank you, Anne
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