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Against pressures of daily demands my physique yields to debilitating energy... …thus, I admit need for invigoration to relax with serenity’s bliss, nestling in God’s strength cuddled by His wondrous pampering presence while rejuvenated through reverberating Gospel music filling my haven’s retreat-room securing me complete rest toward functionality's brace. Amidst rigors of ministerial endeavours my spirit grows weary in striving well... …hence, I succumb to divine refreshing offers as the Lord invites me for a sweet respite in His bosom to meditate His wondrous Word: illumining, comforting, upholding paving for assured revival and thank-propped joy He grants by our vibrant fellowship together at His altar of grace enclosing me --- toward a sublime hiatus of heavenly moments. Along burdensome battles for triumphant faith my human nature gives in to fleshly cravings and soul concedes to worldly conquest dominated by pride… ...so I confess falling into temptation, weak and drained oh, earnestly begging for God’s sanctifying forgiveness as well as empowering mercy for holiness’ pursuits available whenever I abide in Christ* Who provides hiatus haven for recovery and sound well-being.
*Psalm 91:1 He that dwelleth in the secret place of the most High shall abide under the shadow of the Almighty. February 10, 2021 3rd place, "Your best free verse so far this year" Contest Sponsored by John Hamilton; judged on 5/25/2021.

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Date: 4/27/2021 8:56:00 AM
Thanks Beata congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/11/2021 3:51:00 AM
Beautiful ...
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Date: 2/11/2021 7:50:00 PM
It is so sweet when we trust in God’s abiding love and grace. To find rest and comfort in His Word and promises truly gives us refreshment. Nice verse, Beata! :)
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