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Inspired by the song Bye Storm by Injury Reserve, I wrote about the interactions I had with my brother and the journey it has been to navigate our relationship. No matter what storm passes, there is a moment where it passes, and I look forward to enjoying that time with him in any way I can. Written in October of 2023.

In mania, the body unbinds itself. The skeleton’s dense marrow becomes hollow, an avian adjustment. It is accelerated evolution. Fluttering and floating in a slew of thoughts like nervous wind chime chatter. My brother blew in through the rattling gate accompanied by October’s cruelest gale. Eyes unwillingly wide, levered by a crowbar his hazel doorways ripped from their hinges. He ran fervently through the streets of West Chester with lungs coated with cannabis and amphetamines until there was blood beneath his toenails, dripping out just like Jesus’ wine weeping out from his searing limbs. As he entered into the home of our distant childhood, his back burned from the warm wrath of penitent leather the self-flagellation, the begging for the flames of Purgatory To appease the eyes of a looming Lord his fate-sealing gaze hidden in twilight’s comforting veil He says he holds a guilt beyond human comprehension, that he is an evil person. I tell him we are just flawed people. After a decade of intentful detachment, my brother cracks open his ribcage as it blooms like a flower from his sternum. He says there is a sickness in his soul, and that I will never truly know him. My mother and father have had heads made of granite since he has come home. There are heavy eyes shadowed with bags made of storm clouds. They have prayed with their clergy. They have contacted multiple attorneys. My sibling is a storm that has wrought ruin, but he can heal. His violent storm might sow a beautiful season The warmth of his first real smile will bring upon renaissance, and as the tears and snot seep into the soil of my shoulder our cheeks may grow a vibrant emerald moss.

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Date: 4/1/2024 12:46:00 AM
Powerful write very well written.
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B. Andrew Kelly
Date: 4/11/2024 11:11:00 AM
thank you!
Date: 3/29/2024 9:02:00 PM
What a well crafted and beautifully penned piece. This poem hit home for me and I must say, the fourth stanza was masterfully done. Loved it. I wish you and your brother the best, Even the fiercest tempest will break, and give way to the warm of a new sun. All the best, Edward
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B. Andrew Kelly
Date: 4/11/2024 11:13:00 AM
thank you very much Edward. i appreciate the kind words and im glad you felt touched by it.
Date: 3/29/2024 11:31:00 AM
Beautiful and wrenching as well.
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B. Andrew Kelly
Date: 4/11/2024 11:12:00 AM
thank you for your kind words Douglas
Date: 3/29/2024 8:04:00 AM
Loved this 'The warmth of his first real smile will bring upon renaissance". Wonderful poem
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B. Andrew Kelly
Date: 4/11/2024 11:11:00 AM
im glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 3/29/2024 6:03:00 AM
Great poem.
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B. Andrew Kelly
Date: 4/11/2024 11:11:00 AM
appreciate it ricky!
Date: 3/27/2024 7:20:00 PM
Very powerful write I enjoyed reading your work here many blessings.
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B. Andrew Kelly
Date: 4/11/2024 11:11:00 AM
thank you!!
Date: 3/27/2024 2:14:00 PM
This is very beautifully done, each stanza just hits with intensity. This honestly sounds like my own brother wrote this about me in a situation I had years ago, so I think I understand what you're all going through. Thoughts to your brother, seems like youre a thoughtful support network so he's lucky to have you. If you ever want to talk, heyyy
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B. Andrew Kelly
Date: 4/11/2024 11:11:00 AM
much appreciated, your words are very kind
Date: 1/29/2024 6:26:00 AM
< His violent storm might sow a beautiful season > I hope this for you and for your brother. Lovely and dark, great use of allegory :-) TY for sharing (-:
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B. Andrew Kelly
Date: 1/29/2024 4:20:00 PM
thank you for the kind words and taking the time to read

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