Linda Alice Fowler Poet Alliteration

Hi Hey Ho

Connor Constrictor 
crept through the carpet.
Marianne Marmot 
marched through the market
singing, “Hi hey hi hey hi hey ho!”
Boys and girls join in singing,
“Hi hey hi hey hi hey ho!”
 
Tutu Toucan 
turned to and fro
while Wally Walrus 
watched in slow mo.
Singing, “Hi hey hi hey hi hey ho!”
Boys and girls join in singing,
“Hi hey hi hey hi hey ho!”

Kami Chameleon 
chewed a crumpet
and Tommy Tortoise 
tuned up his trumpet
playing, “Hi hey hi hey hi hey ho!”
Boys and girls join in singing,
“Hi hey hi hey hi hey ho!”

All the animals
clamored for more,
more of the funny
musical score
singing, “Hi hey hi hey hi hey ho!”
Boys and girls join in singing, 
“Hi hey hi hey hi hey ho!”

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Terry Miller November 12, 2024 at 1:31 AM This is just fab, congratulations Linda Alice Fowler January 7, 2025 at 10:20 AM Thank you Terry. Appreciate your comments. :)

Paula Goldsmith November 7, 2024 at 9:01 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this fun "Hi hey ho" write. Kids will have fun singing this one. Have a fun day writing away............. Linda Alice Fowler January 7, 2025 at 10:20 AM Thank you Paula. Sing away... :)

Jim Healey November 7, 2024 at 4:51 AM Is there a musical soundtrack to this poem? I can feel a song coming on! Great job. Congrats on the win. Linda Alice Fowler January 7, 2025 at 10:19 AM LOL. We could create one ;) Thanks Jim! :)

David Crandall October 30, 2024 at 10:01 AM Fun one elle! If this is was in a kid's book, you could read it and then ask the kids to come up with their own animals. Linda Alice Fowler October 31, 2024 at 7:33 AM Thanks Dave. Yes, it could be a learning tool, as well as fun to hear the kids' input! :)

Joseph May October 24, 2024 at 10:26 AM A lovely musical score by the the animals, Very nicely done Linda Linda Alice Fowler October 25, 2024 at 9:45 AM Oh so many thanks Joseph. I appreciate your comments! :)

Hilda Greenhough October 21, 2024 at 6:38 PM I can see this poem in a children's book of poems. It is a good way to discover different animals. I like the words and the song that I can envision. Linda Alice Fowler October 25, 2024 at 9:41 AM Thank you Hilda. That's what I was shooting for. :) I enjoy writing kids' nursery rhymes...brings out the little girl in me, I guess. :)

Joe Maverick October 20, 2024 at 9:12 AM Hello Linda-Alice hello.' I in fact tried singing This out loud at my table in the street..In no Time.' I had four servings of duck in hi ho hoy Sauce..? I reckon it was that refrain..? Anyhow i've just put it in freezer As you arr partly to blame' Let know your address so we can split the bill.' Sometimes theres no sugar coating things.' Lol))) Linda Alice Fowler October 25, 2024 at 9:38 AM LOL. Hello my friend. I hope you duck was palatable, If so, please send to me in Texas, PS: I'm not fond of duck in any form...a bit tough and oily to me. :)

Arthur Vaso October 20, 2024 at 1:35 AM Loved this!

Tom Cunningham October 19, 2024 at 11:20 AM An enjoyable read Linda, perfect alliteration, best of luck in the contest. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom Linda Alice Fowler October 19, 2024 at 3:11 PM Hi Tom. Nice to hear from you! Thanks for stopping by. Hope all is well :)

Kim Rodrigues October 19, 2024 at 11:11 AM Very cute! Linda Alice Fowler October 19, 2024 at 3:10 PM Thanks Kim!:)

Panagiota Romios October 19, 2024 at 11:02 AM Linda, your patience in writing with delicacy, finesse, and beauty anazes me! Including your love of nature…. Add the use of alliteration. Wow, you are fantastic, besides being a loviing friend. Love you, Pangie xx Love, Pangie Linda Alice Fowler October 19, 2024 at 3:09 PM Hi dear friend. You know the tech issues I’ve had this week. So glad you stopped by, many thanks for your sweet words! Much love. :):)

Hiya Sharma October 19, 2024 at 9:35 AM It is indeed a galore of delightful scenes! What a beautiful piece you've painted dear lovely Linda ~ such immaculate alliterations throughout which really make this write stand out with a lyrical flow and captivating essence. I absolutely love how artistic you are with words... I'm sure it must have been a heartwarming and colourful march for all of them, haha! Sending lots of best wishes & light ur way :) Linda Alice Fowler October 19, 2024 at 3:05 PM Hello Hiya. Many thanks for your glowing comments! :)