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Hi Hey Ho

Connor Constrictor crept through the carpet. Marianne Marmot marched through the market singing, “Hi hey hi hey hi hey ho!” Boys and girls join in singing, “Hi hey hi hey hi hey ho!” Tutu Toucan turned to and fro while Wally Walrus watched in slow mo. Singing, “Hi hey hi hey hi hey ho!” Boys and girls join in singing, “Hi hey hi hey hi hey ho!” Kami Chameleon chewed a crumpet and Tommy Tortoise tuned up his trumpet playing, “Hi hey hi hey hi hey ho!” Boys and girls join in singing, “Hi hey hi hey hi hey ho!” All the animals clamored for more, more of the funny musical score singing, “Hi hey hi hey hi hey ho!” Boys and girls join in singing, “Hi hey hi hey hi hey ho!”

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Terry Miller

Date: 11/12/2024 1:31:00 AM

This is just fab, congratulations

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/7/2025 10:20:00 AM

Thank you Terry. Appreciate your comments. :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/7/2024 9:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this fun "Hi hey ho" write. Kids will have fun singing this one. Have a fun day writing away.............

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/7/2025 10:20:00 AM

Thank you Paula. Sing away... :)

Jim Healey

Date: 11/7/2024 4:51:00 AM

Is there a musical soundtrack to this poem? I can feel a song coming on! Great job. Congrats on the win.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/7/2025 10:19:00 AM

LOL. We could create one ;) Thanks Jim! :)

David Crandall

Date: 10/30/2024 10:01:00 AM

Fun one elle! If this is was in a kid's book, you could read it and then ask the kids to come up with their own animals.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/31/2024 7:33:00 AM

Thanks Dave. Yes, it could be a learning tool, as well as fun to hear the kids' input! :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/24/2024 10:26:00 AM

A lovely musical score by the the animals, Very nicely done Linda

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/25/2024 9:45:00 AM

Oh so many thanks Joseph. I appreciate your comments! :)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/21/2024 6:38:00 PM

I can see this poem in a children's book of poems. It is a good way to discover different animals. I like the words and the song that I can envision.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/25/2024 9:41:00 AM

Thank you Hilda. That's what I was shooting for. :) I enjoy writing kids' nursery rhymes...brings out the little girl in me, I guess. :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/20/2024 9:12:00 AM

Hello Linda-Alice hello.' I in fact tried singing This out loud at my table in the street..In no Time.' I had four servings of duck in hi ho hoy Sauce..? I reckon it was that refrain..? Anyhow i've just put it in freezer As you arr partly to blame' Let know your address so we can split the bill.' Sometimes theres no sugar coating things.' Lol)))

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/25/2024 9:38:00 AM

LOL. Hello my friend. I hope you duck was palatable, If so, please send to me in Texas, PS: I'm not fond of duck in any form...a bit tough and oily to me. :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/20/2024 1:35:00 AM

Loved this!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/19/2024 11:20:00 AM

An enjoyable read Linda, perfect alliteration, best of luck in the contest. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/19/2024 3:11:00 PM

Hi Tom. Nice to hear from you! Thanks for stopping by. Hope all is well :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/19/2024 11:11:00 AM

Very cute!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/19/2024 3:10:00 PM

Thanks Kim!:)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/19/2024 11:02:00 AM

Linda, your patience in writing with delicacy, finesse, and beauty anazes me! Including your love of nature…. Add the use of alliteration. Wow, you are fantastic, besides being a loviing friend. Love you, Pangie xx Love, Pangie

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/19/2024 3:09:00 PM

Hi dear friend. You know the tech issues I’ve had this week. So glad you stopped by, many thanks for your sweet words! Much love. :):)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/19/2024 9:35:00 AM

It is indeed a galore of delightful scenes! What a beautiful piece you've painted dear lovely Linda ~ such immaculate alliterations throughout which really make this write stand out with a lyrical flow and captivating essence. I absolutely love how artistic you are with words... I'm sure it must have been a heartwarming and colourful march for all of them, haha! Sending lots of best wishes & light ur way :)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/19/2024 3:05:00 PM

Hello Hiya. Many thanks for your glowing comments! :)