Hi-Poo Spewed Over Couldn'T Hold It

brief walk with new beau for every step I take, "THPPTPHTPHPHHPH" most mortifying 9/29/2023

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Hilo Poet

Date: 10/31/2023 6:27:00 PM

I take 'twas a spewrrific sharing, Eve, for soupers as well! Cheers on your 1st placement in John's contest, my friend! Aloha, William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/31/2023 2:52:00 PM

So embarrassing. Big congrats , Eve

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/30/2023 1:53:00 PM

That would be mortifying Eve! Embarrassing... Congratulations! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/30/2023 8:02:00 AM

ewww eve best use a cork in future lol :-( many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

The Situation

Date: 9/30/2023 7:10:00 AM

Yes Intresting.

Silent One

Date: 9/29/2023 11:57:00 AM

This is an interesting one my friend... what inspired this?

Eve Roper
Date: 9/29/2023 12:02:00 PM

John lawless contest. I’m not sure if that’s what he’s asking. I’m just guessing thank you.