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Hey Otto

This is a true account of a day in the life of me Woke up today not feeling quite like myself Went to see what the mirror had to say ... I didn't appear to be looking like somebody else Gave myself the usual wake up: wash cloth and a toothbrush Gave myself the morning ritual sheen: some olive oil and scented hand cream I seemed to be me, fresh and spry ... but I had this nagging feeling something just wasn't quite right Took my daughter and nieces to the park to get ourselves a nice, relaxing swim in The pool was packed as it always was, hot day diving into cool water was so refreshing All the children playing, all the people in the sun laying Me and my crew had us a good time; I said to myself, Freddie, everybody loves the sunshine When we left the pool, a band had just got through performing, and were taking a break Walking with my eyes slightly closed, shaking the water out of the locks of my nappy Afro A Jamaican-accented voice hollered out to me: hey, Otto! The smiling man and his friend asked me when will my band start up playing again My daughter and my nieces bust out laughing, and teasing me on our walk all the way home Hey, Otto ... oh sorry, mon Hey, Otto ... you look just like somebody me know Found out today, I wasn't quite looking like myself, Found out today, I was looking like somebody else

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Date: 3/1/2017 5:16:00 AM
Hey Otto! I have an afro too, maybe they switched us? Oh, wait, my name is Darren....
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Date: 2/28/2017 8:29:00 PM
Very funny story Freddie! A case of mistaken identity! Enjoyed!~Che :)
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Date: 2/28/2017 11:51:00 AM
Happens to me all the time. Unfortunately the man they think I am is not the man I want to be... Good write Freddie.
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Date: 2/28/2017 11:27:00 AM
Ha, well you should have sang them your tune Otto. :) I'll bet it was that scented hand cream, it's Otto's favorite too. This was funny Freddie and even funnier to know it is true
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