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He’s Smooth-I’m Breathless

And it’s just like the ocean under the moon Oh, it’s the same as the emotion I get from you You’ve got the kind of lov’n that can be so smooth, yeah —Itaal Shur, Robert Thomas He’s Smooth-I’m Breathless Rob’s smooth, intoxicant, erotic voice. He sings slowly with sass, a charming rasp. For ringing in new year, he was my choice. The instruments’ charm me, I’m in their grasp. A noddle swoon, elixir fix of cool. An enchantment of sea and moon, in tides. Breathless in nineteen- ninety-nine whirlpool. In sultry croon - I lose my mind, besides.

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Date: 5/29/2025 12:59:00 PM
Wow haven't each one of us fallen in love with a song idol or band, or member of a band. our hearts a flutter we would go to school and in hotter than hot excitement discuss how you so sizzly describe in your write, our heartthrobs, until the end of break bell rang. Some we merely just really enjoy listening to these days. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/29/2025 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day with your win.......
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Date: 5/27/2025 4:41:00 PM
cool rhymes!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/28/2025 7:12:00 AM
Thank you, David! :)
Date: 5/27/2025 4:33:00 AM
- Congratulations, Kim ... lovely poem :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/28/2025 7:11:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 5/26/2025 9:18:00 PM
Very passionate and erotic- liked the end
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/28/2025 7:11:00 AM
Thank you, Paige!
Date: 5/26/2025 7:55:00 PM
Your poem makes me think of the singers that have made me swoon through the years! CONGRATS on your win, Kim. Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/28/2025 7:11:00 AM
Thank you, Janice! :)
Date: 5/26/2025 7:44:00 PM
A story told using a comely poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/28/2025 7:11:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 5/26/2025 12:52:00 PM
This too is SMOOTH. And smokin'.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/26/2025 3:21:00 PM
THank you, my friend!
Date: 5/26/2025 9:15:00 AM
How can I not admire your exotic love poem. Sure to gain a high placement. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/26/2025 12:46:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 5/26/2025 7:04:00 AM
Kim this is such a cheerful poem, to describe breathless. Back in the day, being breathless at a concert or just listening to our favourite performers was quite normal. You brought back wonderful memories. My first live concert was to see the Monkees when I was 13. I thought Mickey Dolenz was the coolest thing EVER. Your poem is wonderful.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/26/2025 12:47:00 PM
That must have been so fun! Thank you!
Date: 5/24/2025 8:58:00 AM
A great poem. So many of us have happy memories of an artistic idol. Have a lovely long weekend and keep writing these spectacular poems.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2025 11:02:00 AM
Thank you, Hilda! Happy weekend!
Date: 5/24/2025 7:41:00 AM
Kim, this one has me smiling this morning…thanks for that - I needed it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2025 7:54:00 AM
And thank you…smiling back! I just loved that song! One of my all time favorites!

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