He's In a Pickle

I gave my love a sour pickle
His eyeballs then started to trickle
Puckered up was his mouth
And his tongue had gone south
To see him so gave me a tickle!






**for Pickles &Tickles  limerick contest
sponsored by (Destroyer ((Poet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 17, 2010 at 10:57 AM
Deb, Very late on my congratulations,, Shame on me.. better late than never. Had fun reading all entries.. CONGRATULTIONS once again... always,..p.d.
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November 15, 2010 at 9:19 PM
haha, funny one. Congratulations, Deb. LUv, Andrea
Fraser Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 2:23 PM
Many congratulations Deb on your win in pd's contest >> James :)
Brown Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations on your win Deb in P D's contest "Pickles & Tickles *Limerick*". Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 9:48 AM
Qwonderful approach to humor Deb, Smile. Congratulations on your worthy Limerick's place. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 8:19 AM
Congrats Deb on your winning poem in P.D.'s contest on pickles.. a great Limerick u created so enjoy your sweet victory this happy Sunday my friend with lots of luv..
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November 14, 2010 at 6:36 AM
Congratulations..Sara
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October 16, 2010 at 5:08 AM
love it duncan
Roberts Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 3:35 PM
adorable, good luck in the contest
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