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He's In a Pickle

I gave my love a sour pickle His eyeballs then started to trickle Puckered up was his mouth And his tongue had gone south To see him so gave me a tickle! **for Pickles &Tickles limerick contest sponsored by (Destroyer ((Poet

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/17/2010 10:57:00 AM

Deb, Very late on my congratulations,, Shame on me.. better late than never. Had fun reading all entries.. CONGRATULTIONS once again... always,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2010 9:19:00 PM

haha, funny one. Congratulations, Deb. LUv, Andrea

James Fraser

Date: 11/15/2010 2:23:00 PM

Many congratulations Deb on your win in pd's contest >> James :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/15/2010 10:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Deb in P D's contest "Pickles & Tickles *Limerick*". Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 11/15/2010 9:48:00 AM

Qwonderful approach to humor Deb, Smile. Congratulations on your worthy Limerick's place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/14/2010 8:19:00 AM

Congrats Deb on your winning poem in P.D.'s contest on pickles.. a great Limerick u created so enjoy your sweet victory this happy Sunday my friend with lots of luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/14/2010 6:36:00 AM

Congratulations..Sara

Duncan Chappell

Date: 10/16/2010 5:08:00 AM

love it duncan

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/11/2010 3:35:00 PM

adorable, good luck in the contest