Hereward College - a New Hope

So much hope for understanding bright, 
Larking sombrely, vertical as a servant,   
Reluctance explained, quite irreverent,
For the first time feeling justified, right, 
No matter the obliqueness of my plight; 
But I could not certain issues circumvent, 
Even though I risked an unstable mind, 
Nearly there, almost ninety percent tight, 
But not completely at the table spread;
I pull myself together with both hands, 
Facing the community, my world given, 
Steadfast guardians need a talking bed;
Conversation is sway and will enliven, 
But disappointment visits me in strands. 

Rhoda Monihan 


Poetry form: Italian sonnet

5th November 2015
For Contest: Dancing With Description
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 10, 2015 at 11:37 AM
Rhoda, Congratulations on your awesome win. SKAT
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November 9, 2015 at 10:25 PM
Congrats, Rhoda, well done! Viv x
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November 9, 2015 at 6:44 PM
Congratulations!
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