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Penned, September 12, 2026/  Human Written
For the International Contest, Pick-A-Title, Vol 59 (Theme #3)
Sponsor, Edward Ibeh

Cute Baby Girl's Amazing Haircut Transformation

"Tears are words the mouth can't say nor can the heart bear."

                                                  Quote by _ Josua Wisenbaker

Here So Nobody Sees Me Cry

 
It happened on a winter day many years ago, my big sister was killed by a truck, after slipping off a snowbank . . . mom was yelling at her to get down, she turned, smiled at us and waved, then, suddenly slipped down into the street. I will never forget my mom's screams, it was my birthday the next day. The days that passed after were confusing, I was sent to gran and gramps, my parents arranging a funeral, they never took me. (I asked why for years) When it was all over they came for me, and my father said, "we have to cut her hair." You see both my sister and I, had long, long dark hair and we looked very much alike, I suppose they wanted me to look different. Well, they cut it short, but, I was still the same little girl, and I still looked like my sister . . . they kept cutting it all through my childhood, I would run to the attic holding my doll weeping, "here nobody sees me cry." It kept going on . . . until, I was old enough to protest, and then, I was on a mission to grow my hair as long as I could and to this day I will not cut it. I will never understand the why . . . did they want to erase me . As my hair grew long my confidence soared, and in my dads last days he loved to stroke my long hair . . .
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Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 6:25 PM
this is such a poignant poem, Dear Heart. So tragic what happened. I love this. soupmail for you.
La France Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 3:13 PM
Andrea, thank you for the compliment and comment ❤️
Mcconnell Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 1:25 PM
Such a moving piece Constance, so personal but written with great expression and passion. Blessings be yours, Gordon
La France Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 3:13 PM
Gordon, thank you for the compliment ❤️
George Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 5:54 AM
I know why they cut your hair. They must have had an unconscious fear that your sister' s fate might fall on you. So touching is the poem.
La France Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 3:21 PM
Valsa, thank you for the comment and compliment❤️
M  Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 5:03 PM
Oh Constance my heart truly goes out to you…losing and witnessing the loss of your sister ,dealing with your parents grief and your own confusion , fear and grief as a little girl. Beautifully told. Big Cuddles Constance! Debx
La France Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 3:22 PM
Deb, thank you for the compliment, compassion and comment ❤️
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 3:41 PM
Hello Constance, your parents were wrong to cut your hair. it did not change anything I am glad you decided to grow your hair. Hugs. /Darlene/😊
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 16, 2026 at 9:44 AM
Hello Constance, you are welcome. Enjoy your day. Hugs. /Darlene/ 😊
La France Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 3:22 PM
Darlene, thank you for the comment and compassion ❤️
Scragg Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 3:02 PM
Such trauma Constance 💔 The background prior to the use of the chosen prompt makes the line very powerful on its impact. A child finding the safe space to cry with their comfort toy to hug. There's depth to the empowerment you felt by growing not just in age but the hair too... there's validation too in how your poem ends. Very moving. Xx 🌹✨️
La France Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 3:23 PM
Natasha, thank you for the compassion, comment and compliment ❤️
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